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Writer’s block is sure a thing

So: I expected to have more written by now.

I should have had at least 6,000 more words written; instead I’ve been struggling to hit 2,000 all month. Since I’m pretty unlikely to make it ...

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January updates

…or lack thereof. Sorry; it's been a less productive month for a variety of reasons than I'd expected (or wished).

I'm still going to try to have something posted from Kani's story this mon...

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Finding the story

In the introduction to the still-untitled Kani story, the last bullet point in my list of “things I still don’t know” was “whether this is even going somewhere at all.” This is still sort...

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Kani’s story, part 2

The clouds had started to break during the time Kani was in the coffee shop, drizzle replaced by sunbeams, the air strong with pavement-after-rain scent. The coyote took a circuitous route to the b...

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Kani’s story, part 1

Note: I originally planned to put two scenes together for the first post, but each one is pretty big, so I'm going to follow this post up in a few days with the next scene. View Post

A new Mensura story: (re-)introducing Kani

So. Tomorrow I plan to do something I haven’t done in a long time, at least intentionally: publish part of a story that’s still in unfinished first draft state. First, though, a little story ab...

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Lovely Little Fish

This is not the story I planned to write. It’s a silly image that leapt into my head and wouldn’t let go until I wrote it to get it out. (I’m not sure it worked.) This is a companion...

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Fall updates – no charge this month

Happy Thanksgiving to those celebrating it (or, if you already have, I hope yours was happy)!

If you’ve been following me on Twitter, you know I’ve been having a bit of writer’s block t...

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Updates and thank yous!

So: no updates at the moment, I'm afraid, but I have many ideas that I'm hoping I can move on. If I don't get anything out this month I'll cancel the payment processing for November, though. I may ...

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Next steps!

First, I’m sorry I didn’t get this post out earlier in the week; I intended to, but my “real” job had me working at a trade show and leaving me unusually wiped.

While there wasn’t u...

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Looking ahead

As the screenplay wraps up this week, here’s some thoughts on what’s ahead.

First off, since last July, when Saida & Autumn started, I’ve managed…

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Red Savina 4

Gabrielle has some sharp questions for Harry, but is interrupted by a crisis. While she finds herself confronting the police, Harry searches through Mirasol's lab notebooks.

Note: this is...

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Red Savina 3

Harry convinces a reluctant Gabrielle to take Mirasol in as a temporary boarder. As the two women try to learn about one another, the vixen begins to wonder just what game her nephew is playing. View Post

Red Savina 2

Harry urges Mirasol to make nice with the Underwoods. When she reluctantly visits, she finds them in a literal fight—and no one expects what happens next.

Since screenplays don't have chapt...

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Red Savina 1 (Opening)

The opening scene of Red Savina, where we meet most of the main players. It's a grand party at the Underwood Estate, but not everyone is enjoying themselves…

After some deliberatio...

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How to read a screenplay

(Because this seems like a good post before I begin serializing one.)

The title makes this sound either more complicated or more pretentious (why not both!) than it truly is. It’s not d...

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The Plan

I’ve finished the outline! The screenplay itself is underway, although just five pages in. I’m still working out how big each weekly posting is going to be; I’ll probably have a better sense ...

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The nuts and bolts of screenplays

One of the many quirks of screenplay writing is one I obliquely referred to in the last update: they have a specific formatting style that goes back many, many decades. As the world moved ...

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Updates: on outlining and party scenes

Outlining

While I’m generally not a “pantser” (that is, someone who tends to write stories “by the seat of their pants,” I’m not generally an outliner. With few excepti...

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Theme, character, and saving cats

In “The mad science of story structure,” I talked about—yes—story structure. I got into character arc vs. plot...

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Dr. Jekyll and Ms. Savina

So, confession time: while I “knew” the story in the way it feels like everybody knows the story, I hadn’t read Robert Louis Stevenson’s The Strange Case of Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde...

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The mad science of story structure

In my introductory post, I talked about the three-act formula for screenplays. Countless books about it have appeared over the years, and more recently “story development” software has popped u...

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Meet Red Savina

So if I’m going to write a screenplay, what’s it going to be about?

I mean, it’s going to be about a giantess, because hi, hello, have we met? Okay, beyond that. As I put it on...

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So, for my next trick…

…I’m going to pull a screenplay out of a hat.

(“That trick never works!”)

Screenplays are interesting beasts: unless you’re doing a weird experimental art house film, a movie ...

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Wrap-up and the next adventure

The final word count for Mensura College: Saida & Autumn as posted is 78,375, which makes it far and away the longest macrophile story that I've written. (Only one non-macrophile work ...

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What’s Next

As Saida & Autumn wraps up, I’ve been thinking about what to do next—and about what worked and didn’t work for me this time.

This was my first try at a long “slice of lif...

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Updates

I'm still thinking about how (or if) to restructure the rewards at various levels; this is mostly about doing something other than the monthly chat for $9+ patrons, as that doesn't seem to be somet...

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Holiday Break

Happy New Year! I'm taking this week off to work on the next chapter or two of the serial and to think about what's coming next. I'd really like to hear from patrons abut what else you might want t...

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Holiday scheduling

Hi, everyone! As you know, the holidays are fast approaching, like a rampaging kaiju in a Santa hat. I usually travel to be with family for the last couple of weeks of the year, and this year is no ex...

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Eat the Rich

It was only sheer luck—at least, so he thought at the time—that Tyler overheard the security guards trying to throw the trick-or-treaters off the mansion grounds.

The fox just happened to be wal...

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