9/5/23 Update
Hey everyone!
So, to keep you guys up to date on the progress of the revisions, I'm about a little under halfway through. 45% at the very least. Unfortunately, this doesn't include the Patron...
2023-05-09 13:38:41 +0000 UTC View Post
Hey everyone!
So, to keep you guys up to date on the progress of the revisions, I'm about a little under halfway through. 45% at the very least. Unfortunately, this doesn't include the Patron...
2023-05-09 13:38:41 +0000 UTC View PostWell, this is embarrassing. Apparently the first time I had Lori doing laundry she had no trouble drying her clothes using Whispering. I honestly forgot that. This reread/edit is reall... 2023-05-06 13:35:46 +0000 UTC View Post
So, I've rewritten the scene where Lori builds the shelters again to emphasize that the speed came about at the expense of quality. This will hopefully make future building scenes wher... 2023-05-02 09:12:32 +0000 UTC View Post
Well everyone, billing is currently paused as I work on getting this book actually published, and getting illustrations, and editing, and making new scenes to explain things better, and new scenes ...
2023-04-29 16:05:29 +0000 UTC View PostMaking The Third Prototype
The following day, Lori found herself sitting alone at her table, staring at an empty bench opposite her. A part of her had expected this ...
2023-04-29 16:00:02 +0000 UTC View Post"We'll need to work closer with the smiths," Rian said as they ate lunch. "Unless we learn more that says otherwise, after its alloyed working it will probably be more normal metalwork than anythin...
2023-04-27 16:00:02 +0000 UTC View PostSo, a reminder that the last update of Volume 2 will drop this Friday, and that I will be pausing billing on Sunday as I get to work editing Volume 1 for publication to Amazon... and get new cover ...
2023-04-27 05:30:27 +0000 UTC View PostLori wanted to stare at the results of their experiment, to sit down and start seriously considering the implications of what had just happened. However, they had molten metal in a container, and m...
2023-04-25 16:00:05 +0000 UTC View PostHey everyone! Here's the first draft of the first chapter of the Amazon edition. I'm not going to put up EVERY chapter, but I figure I'd put up a few of the early ones. Some typos and erro... 2023-04-25 13:22:43 +0000 UTC View Post
"We need to talk," Rian said as soon as they were all back in the house.
"About what, Rian?" Mikon said as she started to undo her blouse.
Rian—he wasn't her man, their man, ...
2023-04-25 05:11:54 +0000 UTC View PostThe following day, Lori found herself sitting alone at her table, staring at an empty bench opposite her. A part of her had expected this happening, and that part was nodding in satisfaction at bei...
2023-04-23 16:00:02 +0000 UTC View PostThe Production Mold And The Second Prototype
Of course, despite the previous failures, Lori tried all the molds again, just to be sure. She even made a little level ...
2023-04-22 16:00:02 +0000 UTC View PostOver lunch, Lori and Rian discussed matters. River's Fork was progressing and remaining relatively stable, and people were all regularly eating in the dining hall now, even if they did so far earli...
2023-04-20 16:00:06 +0000 UTC View PostAfter breakfast the next day, the trip to the edge of the demesne was quick, and this time they didn't bring any people to gather ropeweed with them. When they arrived at the edge, Lori was glad to...
2023-04-18 16:00:07 +0000 UTC View PostSo... on consideration, even though I'll turn off the billing, I think I'll post some of the status updates and samples of edited chapters for the publishing edition here. For example, for the publ...
2023-04-17 02:34:21 +0000 UTC View PostOf course, despite the previous failures, Lori tried all the molds again, just to be sure. She even made a little level table using ice to give the curved molds the best chance of working. Some of ...
2023-04-16 16:00:02 +0000 UTC View PostIt's Not The Same, Again
Lori finished with the mold prototypes that afternoon. There was one made from pressing a bead down on softened bone, one made by a ring of ...
2023-04-15 16:00:02 +0000 UTC View PostNow... usually I give you guys more time to answer when I put up these kinds of polls, but this time I kinda know what I want to write. Right now, it's more of a question of whether you want to rea...
2023-04-15 14:16:22 +0000 UTC View PostYo! So, I've considered the progress of the story and have decided that I've reached a good stopping point for Volume 2, which will be the last story update of the month.
At that point,...
2023-04-15 06:16:05 +0000 UTC View PostThe rain began to fall about halfway to the edge. Lori had to adjust her grip on her hat and tried to divert the falling rain with a binding of airwisps. It was inconsistent cover, since while the ...
2023-04-13 16:00:02 +0000 UTC View PostSo, I’m literally in the middle of watching Kaguya-Sama: First Kiss and can’t help but think ‘Wow, I kinda made Rian into Movie Miyuki, didn’t I?’.
Umu would be Iino or Maki, and R...
The next morning, Lori realized she was down to her last set of clean clothes. That… probably explained the smell in her room. She'd have to do laundry soon, and also air things out. Hmm, the lat...
2023-04-11 16:00:02 +0000 UTC View PostLori finished with the mold prototypes that afternoon. There was one made from pressing a bead down on softened bone, one made by a ring of bone, and various other arrangements of shapes, each with...
2023-04-09 16:00:03 +0000 UTC View PostWhenever Ryan visited RF nowadays, he had to ignore the memory of a confident, feminine voice cheerfully suggesting he just kill the people causing him problems, and get on with his day. Some days,...
2023-03-31 21:25:23 +0000 UTC View PostUnpaid Gainful Employment
After they got Rian a new bone tablet, they spent the afternoon conducting several permutations of the initial successful binding. Lori exp...
2023-03-25 16:00:03 +0000 UTC View PostHalf the morning was spend packing the Coldhold with meat from the cold rooms, frozen solid and hard as rock. People had to handle the food carefully so the cold meat wouldn't stick to any...
2023-03-23 16:00:03 +0000 UTC View PostIt was a perfectly ordinary morning in Lolilyuri's demesne. The sun was shining, the bugs were singing, breakfast was cooking, people were getting ready to clean the Um for the week after breakfast...
2023-03-21 16:00:02 +0000 UTC View PostAfter the blunt and very Binder Lori-like discussion during dinner the night before , Mikon had expected to become the subject of mockery. Well, more than she was already. What had originally been ...
2023-03-20 16:01:54 +0000 UTC View PostAfter they got Rian a new bone tablet, they spent the afternoon conducting several permutations of the initial successful binding. Lori experimented with replacing the firewisps anchored to the sam...
2023-03-19 16:00:04 +0000 UTC View PostPrototyping
The smithy was… probably warm, but Lori couldn't tell. It had lightwisps in the ceiling to brightly illuminate the workshop, with sliding cove...
2023-03-18 16:00:02 +0000 UTC View Post