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14: Spectre

“What the fuck is that?!” I exclaimed, in English, which of course nobody understood. The amalgamation screeched and clicked back in what I was pretty sure was aljik, which I didn’t understan...

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Wandering Star 27: Rayjo Tau

The Green Hills hiveheart is made up of ten people, and as Tyk, Smon and Toi walk into the room, it’s immediately obvious that a slim, delicate-shelled woman named Hahn and the man who’d summon...

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13: Maze Invaders

I knew we were getting near the centre of the labyrinth when the trees started to thin out. And I mean that literally – there weren’t less trees, they were just noticeably thinner, the thick ba...

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Wandering Star 26: The Green Hills Hive

The next morning, the caravan wakes to the approach of some Green Hills women, who take their carts to the trader burrow so that the Redstone River visitors can rush on ahead and meet with the hive...

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12: Fight or Flight

“I’m an engineer,” I pointed out.

“You are no kel,” the Princess said.

“W-well, okay, I mean, I’m not aljik. I’m definitely no Princess. It’s like the drakes – they ...

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Wandering Star 25: Red Water Rush

Three days after Smon starts riding in the cart, Bette’s old legs begin to fail her, and she caves to her childrens’ fussing and gets in a cart herself. Having two of their group riding slows t...

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11: Ease of Identification

I don’t know what I am.

I know who I am, of course. The first shape I mastered was that of a perfect ceramic bowl with a fine white rim. My template had been produced by a large blue worm t...

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Wandering Star 24: Backup Plans

Tyk wakes the next morning early and restless. Everyone’s still asleep. The pale stars visible through the burrow opening wake her properly, although she’d rather doze back off – there’s so...

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10: Friends and foes

“Ask me something,” Glath demanded as I paced the edge of the cliff, looking down into the fog below. It had been a few days since our investigation and the shallow bites of the crabs were heal...

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Wandering Star 23: On The Road

In a caravan, the carts are usually ordered from lightest to heaviest, to help prevent carts getting bogged down or stuck. Which means that as they set off, Tyk finds herself in the lead, with her ...

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9: Danger above, danger below

One day, as Captain Nemo was almost ready to lay her first batch of eggs, an atil on scavenger duty wandered too far from the guards and went missing. She reappeared the next morning, slightly batt...

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Wandering Star 22 : Nailing It

One of the older diggers, Maiza, comes to find Tyk while she’s on soil clearing duty in one of the peripheral tunnels. “Hey, Tyk. You can understand the skyborn visitor, right?”

“Abou...

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8: Dream Team

“It’s the carbon dioxide,” I lied. “It’ll suffocate us all if we’re not careful.” I pointed at the part of my tangled twig map that, according to Harlen, was supposed to represent the...

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Wandering Star 21: Star children

“What in there?” Smon asks as she and Tyk walk away from the burrow.

“Just a fight,” Tyk says. She inspects her leg; exoskeleton and joint are intact, Ayan hadn’t split or torn anyt...

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7: Best-laid plans

It was two days later when I looked up from a complicated pile of twigs to see Ain walking past on his way to the surface.

“Hey! Ain!” I jogged over.

Ain shrank back at the sight of...

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Wandering Star 20: Family Commitments

Smon listens to Tyk explain the issue. “And now hiveheart think to send or not send messenger?”

“Yeah. I mean, they’ll send people. They only need to go to two locations, and it’s p...

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6: Home

We found an unconscious Kerlin not too far from where Kit had dragged me out of the water. He was lying half in the water, but through some miracle, his face wasn’t submerged. I dashed over and p...

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Wandering Star 19: For the Hive

Half a season ago, Tyk wouldn’t have dared approach a member of the hiveheart directly, but with the welfare of Smon’s hivemates in the balance she tracks down Hetta that very night, cornering ...

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5: A-sailing we shall go

Things seemed to be going well. The waves were low and gentle even as the shore disappeared behind us, and the call of the nest grew stronger and stronger as I rowed. There had been a couple of rea...

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Wandering Star 18: Silk and Stone

If the hive is working on the assumption of no trade, there are two critical industries likely to suffer more than any other – silk, and blackmoss. Silk is made by spiders high up in the tower, h...

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4: The Parable of the Child

No way. No way. There had to be another explanation. He couldn’t… he couldn’t actually be alive? I’d been trying for this, I’d been planning for this, but…

I scooped up a few spid...

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Wandering Star 17: A New Hive

Slowly, haltingly, nervously, and with Tyk’s help, Smon tells her story to the hiveheart. The room is crowded, with Tyk and her two parents and Smon all crammed in with the hiveheart itself, and ...

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3: Clarity is suspicious

Onward we walked, bravely taming our very own planet, the new masters of Sanctuary. We surveyed our kingdom day by day, and…

Okay, it was super boring. Walking is really, really boring. We ...

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Wandering Star 16: Dangers of the Sky

“We’ll come with you,” San tells Tyk as the family head out of their residential chamber that morning.

“Aren’t you needed in the tunnels?” Tyk asks. “The collapse – ”

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2: Hello, void

By the next morning, the squid tentacles in the trough had dissolved completely and the trough contained a long layer of transparent gelatin-like substance that was safe to eat and fairly full of e...

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Wandering Star 15: Pollen Storm

Tyk doesn’t have time to worry about Smon right now. The hive needs her more. If Smon does anything particularly alarming, the pair guarding her egg will let the hive know; until then, there’s ...

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Charlie MacNamara, Intrepid Explorer 1: Building a Sanctuary

Here’s some friendly life advice for you: don’t ever go to space.

I mean, I guess if you’re an astronaut or whatever, and spend years training to leave the prison of Earth’s gravity a...

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Wandering Star 14: Broken Brakes

“Smon Earth make forty three Javlyn, Smon kind inside, eggs inside, food inside. All go to other suns, other Earths.”

“Do all the sentinels have people on them?” Tyk asks.

“No...

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