Huy Vu

[Colored HD Page] Ch. 4 - Page 5

Added 2020-03-07 08:58:39 +0000 UTC

The result of my new drawing style looks better than I expected~!

I dealt with some challenges during the drawing and finalization process of this page though. The order of reactions depicted in parallel with the structure of the dialogue turned out a bit complicated.

I personally don't like dialogues in comic or manga with panels showing the persons who are actually talking to each other in opposite directions instead of letting them face each other. In most cases it feels odd.

Gremorey's casual talk about the crucial situation is the last straw which breaks the camel's back so it was important that this page eventually ends with Chaleure's reaction. The beginning panel shows Gilltajagall who is explaining the current situation so it was already settled that the first picture is followed by Chaleure's shock. The problem with my early version was that I originally drew the third panel with Gilltajagall on it. I wasn't satisfied with the arrangement of the panels since both panels which contained Gilltajagall where on the same side on the right. So I changed the dialogue and the arrangement a bit. It became a bit troublesome since I had to mirror the fourth panel with Gremorey and Chaleure on it and additionally had to redraw his face as well (because of the opposite position of his monocle.

Haha, writing dialogues and determining the panel order can be really tough...