Magic26backup
Added 2024-11-01 00:13:32 +0000 UTCI am not Disney, nor a British lady.
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I intend to yeah, LOL. It's part of the HP poll for a reason. LIke your little image thing!
vimesenthusiast
2025-03-28 17:06:50 +0000 UTCReread this as been on a sw kick lately and really hope to see this be continued
Jamie Celtic
2025-03-28 02:43:07 +0000 UTCAwesome setup! I am really hoping Anakin stays good. And the antagonist sections are cool setup.
MultiverseCosms
2025-01-05 17:23:13 +0000 UTCHey great chapter and I really like the use of the antagonistic sections here. They really provide a great way to keep perspective on a story as wide as this one. I don't know if you like/want help with this kind of stuff but here are a few minor word choice/order errors I spotted while reading. "It just made more sense from a logistics for Harry and the other Jedi aboard the" Sentance just cuts off here "Instead, she loved over to Harry," Think its supposed to be moved not loved "Other than a quick feel of Harry’s rear hit into the others by the intervening island, anyway." Hidden to instead of hit into? "his ultimately futile attempt to rid of us, Potter.” Us of not of us "been washed by many eyes in the past,” Watched not washed? Hope this helps and if you don't want stuff like this in the comments just let me know
Cormag81
2024-11-02 00:45:16 +0000 UTCIt must be self-evident, but this chapter has no title just Chapter 26:
lostone2
2024-11-01 20:35:16 +0000 UTCAwesome as always! Thanks for the update.
Ben
2024-11-01 03:18:21 +0000 UTC
