Bhaalson Remodel Chapter 9
Added 2021-06-01 05:37:22 +0000 UTCI am also trying something new here with Khalid
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Took me a few days but I finished the chapter. Really enjoyed the dungeon chapters, you've done a great job of capturing how challenging the early part of Baldur's Gate could be.
Justin Sully
2021-06-08 11:56:27 +0000 UTCSeen and corrected thanks!
vimesenthusiast
2021-06-07 02:24:29 +0000 UTCDefinitely enjoyed this chapter. It's annoying how many enjoyable stories you have, makes it hard to decide which ones to vote for. Did note a few issues: After finding the miners, there was a message about "You have found and apparently rescued all the miners and slaves in the Dungeon. You still must find", then said Slaves: 40/40. You also messed up Xan's name a couple times at the end: once as Zan, once as Xavier. However, by far the worst mistake was calling Boo a giant miniature space hamster, when he is in fact a miniature giant space hamster. Though if he was a giant miniature space hamster, that would imply there are regular miniature space hamsters, and the idea of tiny hamsters is adorable. Also slightly terrifying, considering Boo going for the eyes this chapter.
M B
2021-06-06 15:39:57 +0000 UTC
