Sword, Bow and Horse Chapter 6
Added 2020-06-25 17:43:59 +0000 UTCHere is the next chapter of SBH
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It depends on if Bhaalson wins this month. If it does then you will see SBH in the August poll. If not, then Bhaalson will be updated in July and the cycle will start anew in September.
vimesenthusiast
2020-06-30 16:54:09 +0000 UTCAgain a great chapter and I think not one word to short. The winter seting and build-up for the coming war was good and I´m looking forward to the battles. Ranmas interaction with Lim was cute and now we know he is a boob man.^^ Valentina´s part in this chapter and also her night talks with Ranma were nice and well written. You can see that behind the whole veil of secrets she still is a young maiden. I hope to see more of her in future and I now really wish for her to become the Queen of Zhcted. She has a good baking with alle the new invention and ideas from Ranma. A industrial revolution could follow. Soph´s arrival and her idea to share Ranma are great and different from your other stories. There the harem is building itself as the story goes, but here we have the idea in the first chapters. Nice.^^ The coming stealth mission and idea to take the whole archives is great and I´m lookign forward to see the reactions of the priests. It will be hillarous. The confrontation with Sasha and Elizavetta was stopped the conflict with her and Elen from canon and also the winter war with Mila, so we have room for somthing else. Maybe Ranma could do a little walk to that nation which Duke Pervo talked to. I would love to see Ranma crasing another slave system like in MW. An other nice touch was the addition of the Beast Lands in the West. A possible target to explore, but that is for the far future. When the war is over and Regin on the throne Ranma also could visit Tina and Sophie like promised and this could lead to an other compain agin the horse lords and a good way to give Valentina more time with him. So all in all I´m still fixed on this story and really excited for more to come. Will we have SBH in the August or September pool?
Niva
2020-06-27 14:20:58 +0000 UTCVery fun chapter. I definitely enjoy the amount of bonding that occurred this chapter, as well as the humor inherent in someone else having the squabbling love interests. I don't know how quickly the ideas Ranma introduced can be realized in a usable form, as I rather doubt that effective guns are so easily created. Yeah, it does change things in the long term, but I see Tina losing quite a few workers to trial-and-error. In regards to the other things he shared, I don't see how he would be able to not share some of that, even if through just helping his friends.
Nobody
2020-06-26 21:20:53 +0000 UTC
