Making Waves 27
Added 2020-05-27 03:31:41 +0000 UTCFirst a sitrep. FILFy is has be
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This was a great chapter and I really like the development of Ranma´s relationships with Jenny and juvia. I can´t wait for the promised 3 way you mentioned in this chapter.^^ The start of the S-Exams were different then the manga and I liked Gildarts reaction to Freed´s interest in Edo-Cana. Those poor guys shouldn´t mess with Dady. The last part was so funny and I can´t wait to see Ultear´s reaction to the Ranma/Asuma meeting. But I have a little question about the people who are on the island. In chapter 26 you wrote that Sheilah would be also there to help with the exams, but it seems like she isn´t there. So how did that change. Also is the mentioned Wizzard Saint our faivorite Mr. Tree, because Mavis said that she and Warrod would have fun in the next exams. All in all a great start for the next Guild war and with perhaps still more mages on the way * Minerva I´m looking at you* to help I can´t wait to read more. The final question is if you plan to also do a time skip with Carla´s vision about this calamity coming. Perhaps it´s like the orginal manga or somthing else. We have to wait.
Niva
2020-06-08 18:51:26 +0000 UTCah, i pay the monthly fee. It's up to you but i would say with how much you write, its worth it. On the other hand, your grammar is some of the best out there for fanfiction as it is.
Curiosity44
2020-05-27 05:11:04 +0000 UTCmine doesn't seem to work like that, alas. I think it is because i have to copy and paste segments out - my chapters are too large for the free version to handle and I have yet to be convinced the full version would be worth it.
vimesenthusiast
2020-05-27 05:08:05 +0000 UTCAuthor-san! Thanks for the chap but i wanted to mention something. When you upload a chapter to Grammarly, it removes special fonts BUT if you correct the grammar mistakes and download the chapter from Grammarly, all your special fonts will be returned to normal. So it's not changing anything, its only making it easier to fix grammar mistakes before it will be returned to normal. it took me a while to realize it and i spent a few hours in the gym to work off my anger at realizing it lol.
Curiosity44
2020-05-27 04:13:20 +0000 UTC
