7p
Added 2021-09-26 23:51:09 +0000 UTCBig thanks to Euphemural for Spanish translation!
Big thanks to Laviner for Chinese translation!
Comments
Agreed! I fixed it :3
Qundium
2021-09-27 02:06:34 +0000 UTCThank you for feedback :>
Qundium
2021-09-27 02:06:15 +0000 UTCSome periods at the end of "how cute." and "that isn't going to happen." Would be good too
Menthe
2021-09-27 00:48:31 +0000 UTCI'd recommend the following changes to dialogue: "Look how flat you've gotten." "I will make you regret it if you touch me!" "This will be your new home."
Menthe
2021-09-27 00:47:20 +0000 UTC
