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Timelines...

Okay, it looks as though most votes on both Patreon and Subscribestar voted to Remix Blacked to the Max. So, here's the plan with the three timelines.

The Majika Timeline

Pretty much, the only way Max is losing her virginity is during this timeline. Of course this timeline will have three branches. Chief Jay Daddy and Chief Tommy are being renamed for reasons I'll explain later. Out of all the timelines, the Majika timeline will have the most lore exposition regarding the Majika Empire because... well, it's all going to lead up to the Majika Empire. One thing too... I really want Max to be a complete virgin by the time she arrives, no bj's, no one even having touch her body yet.

My goal is to complete the Majika Timeline completely before any of the other timelines. But yes, we will still see Chloe and Cole, since that'll be how this timeline begins. I may offer one more scene before Max goes to the Majika Empire, and depending on who she watches could depend on which of the chiefs she ends up with. Although, I'm really tempted, storyline wise to make it so Max isn't the only one who goes to the Majika Empire. Perhaps her, and two other girls from Blackwell... I'm mainly thinking Kate and Brooke.

But here's the thing, you won't see those scenes play out in this timeline. Rather, we're only following Max. Therefore, whatever Kate and Brooke is doing, it's happening at the same time whenever Max loses her virginity. During this timeline, I think I'll have it so Chloe is actually Max's voice of reason since Jefferson is all about corruption.

Now some people are wondering about Max getting pregnant... all I'll say is, depending on which Chief she loses her virginity with, maybe... maybe not lol. You'll have to watch all the timelines to see how it all plays out. As for Warren, I think we'll still go with Warren and Max being together. Same premise as before, except I don't think I'll have him as a camera man. I'd also like Chloe to be present at the Majika Empire as well to be supportive. So Warren is still gonna be heartbroken, but supportive of Max regardless of which Chief Max ends up with.

On top of that, Max will narrate each epilogue... she'll explain how her life turned out after the events, and she'll explain how she can go from one timeline to another cough cough Double Exposure Cough 

The next timeline, I want to call it the Betrayal Timeline.

Okay, I'm not going to make Max vindictive or anything. But, I do see her as being Naive, so I think in this timeline, Jefferson wants to corrupt Max. Also, Nathan has it out for Warren, so Nathan wants to put Max in a compromising position where Warren watches while Max does stuff behind his back, or so she thinks is behind his back.

Okay, I won't do the whole stereotypes of thugs, drug dealers, or the sort. I'm not going to have anyone call Max, or any of the guys be verbally abusive. However, I think Jefferson will coax Max into talking dirty to the men.

 

I do apologize that this pic is really crappy, but during the betrayal timeline, I would like this to be one possibility for Max's defloration. Now, I might change up the roster of the men. Probably not Coach, nor Cole, Gas Mask guy which I use for Chief Sajanto, or the other guy all the way to the left. I have ideas on who I can use for this possibility, and they'll probably be all masked men. Maybe just a 4v1 dynamic. I'm thinking the group will be a fertility cult, which was a recommended idea by one of you guys.

 I'd also like to use this character for this timeline. I'm just going to call him "Tommy" because I think Tommy would match a more modern looking character than a tribal chief. As to his backstory, well... he has a San Andreas tattoo. But, I won't make him a thug or anything. But I would like to make him somewhat of a known personality. Online influencer of some sort, a porn star, music artist, but something to where people know him, and they also know he hooks up with women. Either way, I want him to be the guy that takes Max's virginity while Warren just watches in heartbreak.

Another person whom Max could lose her virginity to is Zack from DOA, which from what I understand in the game, he's actually a DJ. So, if Max loses her virginity to him, then I think I'd like it to be some place fancy. In a helicopter, or a roof pool. Someplace Warren could never take Max, and on top of that... Warren gets stood up on a date while Max runs off with Zack. Again, it's not that Max is being vindictive, rather Jefferson and Nathan are manipulating her.

Of course, this timeline stems from Nathan sending Warren porno clips, so this is the endgame goal for Nathan. To get Max to cheat, and expose it to Warren. Now, with Kate, Victoria, and Brooke being absent from this timeline... we'll see that the three of them ended up as virgin tributes in the Majika Empire. So, since Max didn't go to the Majika Empire, Victoria takes her place instead. Which seeing she missed out on that opportunity, Jefferson will use that to manipulate Max.

Now, let's briefly talk about the Coach timeline.

Of course as I said before, Chloe will operating her own OF account. Of course this timeline will be different from the others in the sense that Max kept in touch with Chloe which led to a different outcome. Coach Jay Daddy is actually an old friend of Chloe's mom. As a matter in fact, in the early 90's, she lost her virginity to Coach when he was doing porn.

But now that Chloe is thinking of doing OF, and she's thinking about doing her first boy/girl scene, Joyce finds out and decides if anyone could break Chloe in, who best than Coach?

Of course Max will be narrating this story, and she'll break it down, then she'll explain how she gets involved. Her cherry popping 18th bday celebration with Coach, something totally unintended, but just happens when they celebrate in her dorm after everyone has left. pr so she thinks. Chloe has her phone out recording to see if Coach can get Max into bed, which he does and it goes on Chloe's OF.

Or Max waits, and agrees to be Chloe's camera man as she's ready to let Coach pop her anal cherry, but Max feels a bit left out and wants to join. Or Max really waits, and watches as Coach pops the cherries of Victoria, Kate, and Brooke... and during Coach's bday, Max joins in during their harem orgy.

Timelines...

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So, the more I'm brainstorming how this would work... Max Erotica is the name of the Max Caulfield Prime that'll be telling all the stories. A version of Max that's experienced all the timelines she's ever happened, or will happen. Which definitely helps the whole idea of her telling the stories. I'm very tempted to add my own voice to make it sound like Max and I are having a conversation. But yeah, I'm with you there regarding verbal abuse vs. dirty talk. I do want to emphasize more on humiliation aspect of dirty talk, more so with the fact that Max is cheating, and also age gaps between her and the guys. But yeah, Max Erotica will explain the whole multiverse and the different timelines. She'll explain how she became the Prime Max Caulfield. LiS1 Max can rewind time, Double Exposure Max can look into alternate realities, Max Erotica is a combination of the two. She can view any Max Caulfield timeline, see the branches in each timeline splinter off.... But most of all... she can experience each of Max in every timeline as if it were her own. She'll explain like as if you watched a movie for the first time, and that feeling you had the first time you watched it. The excitement and awe from that first experience. She can experience each timeline as such, as many times as she wants.

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These are some really interesting ideas. :) I'm very excited to see how they will turn out and I feel like you balance it out very well to bring it as many ideas you want to incorporate without having the story lopside to a points it probably shouldn't go. :) The Majika timeline of course sounds really amazing as it always did and I'm eager to see how the new lore aspects will mend with the plot outline. I also like the idea of having different outcomes depending on which chief takes Max's virginity. Lastly, the idea of other girls being there too, but the focus being on Max, is also a great way to balance it out. :) As for the other two timelines, your ideas sound really interesting, but of course it is still too "theoretical" for me to have an idea of how it will turn out. There is a lot of potential still and I'm excited to see the results. I especially like the whole Jefferson and Nathan dynamics meddling with Max and luring her to certain paths. :P Also, as a quick explanation to what I said in my previous message yesterday: I'm totally fine with dirty talk (including explicit dirty talk), but my gripe was rather with actual malevolent verbal abuse towards Max (and potentially other girls too), so what you are planning now is 100% a green flag to me (metaphorically speaking). :D I'm very excited to see how the project will turn out either way. :)

Sajanto


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