How should the scene finish?
Added 2018-08-11 20:11:22 +0000 UTCWell I got a draft of this finished faster than I expected. :)
Here is the first real chapter of Wings 4*. The scene ends up abruptly because I want you guys to choose what happens! Here are four messy options for your perusal!
*Current plan is to do a Prologue + Interludes with a Wynn Mosaad point of view just like Spider Zero in the last book. I think this will be an interesting character study/lore building tool.
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SpectralTime
2018-08-12 04:23:39 +0000 UTCYou worry too much!
Sarah Hawke
2018-08-12 03:59:11 +0000 UTCWhelp... guess the fun is getting spoilt...
SpectralTime
2018-08-12 03:51:41 +0000 UTCIf only... Then again, I'm worried about their world being an apocalyptic waste in which all civilization crumbles, so... freezing her in time could easily be the only thing preserving her happiness at seeing her lover alive.
SpectralTime
2018-08-12 02:43:17 +0000 UTCThanks!
Sarah Hawke
2018-08-12 02:04:06 +0000 UTCBecome the best piloting in -> pilot in
WhiteRabbit
2018-08-12 02:01:59 +0000 UTCAnother reason for Valuri to return soon! :)
Sarah Hawke
2018-08-12 01:58:35 +0000 UTC...Aw... I was hoping to just lie back and enjoy the femdom... Especially when it's literally described as "ruining" her fun...
SpectralTime
2018-08-12 01:36:43 +0000 UTC
