Spider Zero Feedback
Added 2018-07-12 23:23:05 +0000 UTCHey, guys. So since you've had a bit more time to read the previews, I had a few questions for you as I finish up the first draft.
-Do you think the "mystery" here is too confusing, or is it keeping your interest?
-Are the interlude chapters working for you?
-Do you think there's too much exposition or not enough?
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On an unrelated note, I have commissioned a portrait of Kaveri from a different artist that I'm hoping will be pretty cool. And yes, it will have a NSFW version. :)
Comments
After you find out, you'll have to tell me what you were thinking and if it was right. :)
Sarah Hawke
2018-07-15 04:32:30 +0000 UTCReally enjoying it so far, haven't noticed anything too out of whack. I have some pretty strong suspiscions as to the mystery, and I am hoping I am right because my guess is pretty awesome.
WhiteRabbit
2018-07-15 03:54:05 +0000 UTCOh wow! Can't wait to see how it'll turn out, really like the art style.
Linarian
2018-07-13 01:28:26 +0000 UTCYou can check out his stuff here: <a href="https://www.deviantart.com/warmics/art/Heretica-Succubus-Rain-724517016" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://www.deviantart.com/warmics/art/Heretica-Succubus-Rain-724517016</a> Very different style obviously (and more expensive), but I really like his Warcraft art
Sarah Hawke
2018-07-13 00:40:06 +0000 UTCPersonally it keeps me interested and it isn't really confusing, since not enough details are known. For me the amount of exposition is enough. Who's the artist that you commissioned?
Linarian
2018-07-13 00:10:11 +0000 UTC
