Assimilator of Chaos - Fourteenth 3,792 Words - Chapters 42 and 43 along with the first System Forums chapter
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The last part of this post in the google doc is something I am adding into an earlier set of chapters. It is between chapter 6 and chapter 7!!!
It will be a simple forum thread from random users on the internet discussing things that are currently happening! I recently got the idea to try adding this in, so here is the first System Forums chapter from when people first discovered Ashley as the Successor to Chaos!
If you like it, then please leave a comment on the post saying so as I would like to know if you like this sort of thing once in a while.
Click here for chapters 42 and 43, along with the first System Forums chapter! They are 3,792 words long! Or click on the following link:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1JYog1OD4f0GABh0RtK-QyC9dSMUUNCyhYc0NKRd7P2E/edit?usp=sharing
Chapters 1-10 First 22000 Words
Chapters 11-16 Second 9800 Words
Chapters 17-18 Third 3091 Words
Chapters 19-20 Fourth 3076 Words
Chapters 21-22 Fifth 3263 Words
Intermission and Chapter 23 Sixth 2684 Words
Chapter 24-25 Seventh 2925 Words
Chapters 26-27 Eighth 3845 Words
Chapters 28-29 Ninth 3108 Words
Chapters 30-33 Tenth 5971 Words
Chapters 34-35 Eleventh 3293 Words
Chapters 36-37 Twelfth 3402 Words
Chapters 38-41 Thirteenth 6045 Words
Chapters 42-43 and the first System Forums chapter Fourteenth 3792 Words
Comments
I absolutely love forums in these types of stories!
Braden Moody
2024-06-25 17:18:24 +0000 UTCWhile I didn’t mind the forum section, one thing I think would be cool about it is if aside from being a plot device for progression, is if you also used it for Easter eggs, like one of the characters has a name resembling one of the MC’s from other stories, maybe they vaguely get described like one of them. Not putting them all in the same universe, but like “oh you just thing her wings are cool you’re a furry and she looked cute in the snow”
Keegan Moss
2024-06-22 15:48:08 +0000 UTCI’m getting flashbacks to BOFURI: I don’t want to get hurt so I’ll max out my defense… welp doesn’t matter, I really like it, it gives a lot of perspective from other points of view and it’s just a really interesting concept overall, loved the chapter keep it up! :)
Zuuuuuri
2024-06-22 04:58:52 +0000 UTCNot sure how I feel about the whole chatroom tingy! I do agree with the dude about her being cute. I do kinda hope she connects with her sibs, and am very curious what her parents did that made them ... err ... a problem? With the minimal description, seems like they fancied themselves as an elite family, and attempted to beat those expectations into their children. If so, then it might be interesting to see them totally alienated from their obviously united and equally elite offspring.
David Oldfield
2024-06-22 04:46:22 +0000 UTCI like the addition of the forums. It is a great way to provide details of the world at large and is fitting considering the follower system
RedWolf17
2024-06-22 04:41:49 +0000 UTCI already have four more planned out. One of which is actually the next chapter in the story after chapter 43.
WolfShine
2024-06-22 01:56:48 +0000 UTCI like the forum as well, I'm just not sure how often they should be, something for you to think about I guess, maybe a poll? Either way I'm enjoying the story, thanks for the chapters!
James Bradley
2024-06-22 01:46:07 +0000 UTCI very much like getting different peoples opinions. It fits very well in this story with the live feed and constant eyes on her.
Dillsimmons
2024-06-22 01:26:42 +0000 UTCMy question is how long till the forums figure out she takes skills, and till her world finds out afterwards.
Scott McCarthy
2024-06-22 01:07:53 +0000 UTCI enjoyed the forum stuff it helps fill out the universe with what others are thinking
Camille Vacio
2024-06-22 01:06:23 +0000 UTCDoes make it feel a bit like all the Japanese VR novels, those all have forum threads discussing yhe MC's antics.
Scott McCarthy
2024-06-22 01:05:50 +0000 UTCI like the forums chapter. It gives a good background text
Conner Wright
2024-06-21 23:48:22 +0000 UTCI like forum chapters, can give a broader view on MC's actions, and give in universe context that MC doesn't know about
dtape467
2024-06-21 23:34:36 +0000 UTCThe system Forums is really a funny Addition. I hope we see more in the future. Had the whole time a wide grin on my face. And of course as always really nice chapters.
Endoles
2024-06-21 23:29:22 +0000 UTCThanks for the Chapters
Wintermelody
2024-06-21 23:10:37 +0000 UTC
