Coarse Grind - Bonus Pic Challenge!
Added 2020-09-25 04:03:00 +0000 UTCREAD THE INSTRUCTIONS BEFORE COMMENTING!!!
I want your feedback! Hearing back from readers is how I know what works, what could work even better, and what you want more of in the future. As thanks for your constructive criticism, I'll let you vote on the bonus art for the issue!
IN EXCHANGE FOR POSTING YOUR FEEDBACK ON THE ISSUE AS A WHOLE, I WILL COUNT YOUR VOTE ON WHAT BONUS ART TO MAKE.
Leave a comment below containing both:
- A comment on the comic as a whole, what you thought about story/art/etc, what you liked, what you want more of, what you thought could be better, etc! AND...
- Your top preference of bonus art from the options below.
Do NOT post a vote without leaving feedback. Your vote will NOT be counted unless you leave FEEDBACK.
A: Manoa/Bodacia (sex)
B: Manoa/Bodacia (coffee and gossip)
C: Voyeur Fukumi
D: Nurse Manoa
And as always, thanks again for reading. Feedback always welcome, votes tallied on 09/29.
Comments
B
Choky Feddy
2020-09-27 04:07:32 +0000 UTCB. I love that manoa walls are finally coming down around deedo, and as a long time fan the final page warmed my heart. I started following you for the thick ass ladies you drew, but I stay for the scenarios and characters you’ve created
Choky Feddy
2020-09-27 04:07:01 +0000 UTCI'm glad to see Manoa is finally becoming a bit more open with her emotions and Deedo is becoming a bit more confident and outgoing in their relationship. B.
Haxcall
2020-09-26 17:18:42 +0000 UTCI thoroughly enjoyed this story and I can’t wait to see how things develop afterwards. I enjoyed the comedy that stemmed from the misunderstanding. Maybe there can be a pregnancy and probably outside of the “what if” spin-off. It also leaves room for Manoa to nurse Deedo what he recovers. Maybe make the last scene longer but I enjoyed how it ended. I vote B
Ryan P
2020-09-25 22:38:07 +0000 UTCI appreciate the story developing, long term. These two are great for each other. Maybe the dialogue changes when you do B.
Douglas Goldstein
2020-09-25 20:25:44 +0000 UTCI thought this story quite an interesting one, especially with it developing more of Manoa and Deedo's relationship and how Manoa is slowly opening herself up to loving someone again. I vote for B because then it'll have the story come to a full circle, it started off with Manoa & Bodacia having coffee & gossip and it can end with Manoa & Bodacia having coffee & gossip.
MastersJoyUniverse
2020-09-25 18:28:33 +0000 UTCI really enjoyed this one can't wait to see how they handle this going forward and i vote A
Mythking25
2020-09-25 13:24:16 +0000 UTCI vote A sorry forgot to include it
Mac Apple
2020-09-25 06:56:34 +0000 UTCWhaaaat the L word?! From both??!! Things are really heating up in and out of the bedroom. I'm excited to see more of the romance blossoming in the future. Also something I've been wondering, we've seen some of manoa's family and backstory, but not much of Deedo's. We know he's a student but what's his family? Past relationships? Goals?
Mac Apple
2020-09-25 06:56:17 +0000 UTCThere was some great character work in this chapter. Manoa's continued wish to try to disentangle herself from Deedo due to a misreading of their relationship and Deedo's earnestness are on full display. There was some nice sex, things got close to wipeout with Deedo collapsing under Manoa. Fukumi continues to get drawn closer to this demi-love triangle. Loved it. C
Malmedee
2020-09-25 06:33:52 +0000 UTCI really loved the story, it’s nice to see that there’s actual character progression and development between them all...while they also have lots of sex. A
JJax
2020-09-25 04:13:17 +0000 UTC
