CVO003
Added 2019-06-22 06:55:00 +0000 UTCI'm not a big fan of vore except in situations where it results in stuffed tummies. As this is an homage I held to the narrative structure. I also resisted adding more dialogue, which is no small feat for me because I very much enjoy very wordy protagonists.
I am toying with the idea of adding panels because the original piece jumps very quickly from scale to scale after this point. I prefer a slower buildup. If you have a scene you fancy being added I invite you to suggest it. I already have some in mind but I make no promises in any event.
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Woah, was wondering how 'graphic' you'd get for this part! Loving it. Maybe Not-Carol could waddle onto a truck scale, or chug something to wash that feast down?
RumRay
2019-06-22 19:32:20 +0000 UTCHonestly one thing I'd love to see you try is fattening her face up. Plump her cheeks and chin up, thicken her neck. If not that....let's go old school and chugging some milk which causes her breasts to swell up.
Rikki
2019-06-22 14:11:29 +0000 UTCMaybe a ln afterwards scene. Pulled back a bit to take in her full size?
Arc
2019-06-22 09:56:52 +0000 UTC
