WIP : SWAK 00-17
Added 2021-03-27 20:16:24 +0000 UTCAlright! Got a good chunk of the lettering done! Another swing at this and the lettering will be finished, and we can start coloring <3
also here's the extension of the climax
i added 24 in there, and added some more time pressure to her pulling him out before the situation gets stickier~
Anyway! I'll be working on new creatures over the next few days in my spare time, got some fun ideas!
But out of curiosity, do you want to see a bipedal or quadrupedal tapir buddy?
Enjoy your weekends everyone!
Comments
Not generally where one wants a pockoon stuffed into? Or is it? Glad you're enjoying it
InsomniacOvrLrd
2021-03-29 18:52:40 +0000 UTCThat's definitely a whole Pockoon in her.....wait.... Wrong comic? well anyways, as a wise monster once told us, This is awesome.
Mew
2021-03-29 17:35:18 +0000 UTCMuch prefer quadrupedal, personally. Or something inbetween, that can comfortably switch to its hindlegs when needed.
Wren
2021-03-29 04:10:47 +0000 UTCShe did mention swallowing pills his size before. Could be capsule shaped! Ha!
NimbleLatios
2021-03-28 22:13:16 +0000 UTCLooking forward to the completion! Loving what I'm reading. I vote a quad tapir, personally.
NimbleLatios
2021-03-28 22:06:51 +0000 UTCI can’t wait till this is finished....
Krystian MacDonald
2021-03-28 03:28:08 +0000 UTCLoving thissssss~ For the tapir... I think I will vote for bipedal. Both good options, but if bipedal then they can stand up tall to get that snoot into intimate places for the larger creatures~
wugfish
2021-03-28 03:21:04 +0000 UTCI always appreciate it, best to catch it early. I fixed a few as I went through, but some are leftover from the text I could sort if read while entering in the thumbnails and just couldn't spot, its bound to happen. Thank you!
InsomniacOvrLrd
2021-03-27 23:56:54 +0000 UTCBetter get this in before I forget. Page 8 has a typo: "Then get on your back so we can do *his* better". Not sure that kinda thing would be missed in the subsequent phases, but I figured I'd point it out just in case.
Commander672
2021-03-27 23:52:07 +0000 UTCThank you! Real glad you're enjoying it, it's a lot of fun for me
InsomniacOvrLrd
2021-03-27 23:30:10 +0000 UTCyou're just murdering me with this comic, haha <3 they're so adorable together!!!
Shikka
2021-03-27 23:27:49 +0000 UTCThanks! A little drama in the action always amps things up, imo. And he can't help but reach out and grab, in the moment. But it's definitely causing her some concern lol
InsomniacOvrLrd
2021-03-27 22:41:16 +0000 UTCProbably not the most comfortable thing to yank what would feel like a glass ball out of your esophagus, but her telekinesis is definitely going to come in handy for that sort of thing. We'll just have to see~
InsomniacOvrLrd
2021-03-27 22:38:26 +0000 UTCI mean they were readable, it just took some inference lol. and I'm glad you like the addition!
InsomniacOvrLrd
2021-03-27 22:35:48 +0000 UTCAAaaaaaaa~ this is so good! The extra page is amazing and I love how he starts to stick his little arm in the throat! Can’t wait till this is fully fleshed out :D also ya! I wouldn’t mind a tapir buddy!
Scarletmenace
2021-03-27 22:07:38 +0000 UTCI'm thinking bipedal tapir buddy
Telain
2021-03-27 21:47:19 +0000 UTCAh, dang, don't know how to do paragraph breaks on mobile. For future sessions between these two, if her psychic manipulation can create a physical barrier in some way, could they plan out a more intentional swallowing by forming a barrier deeper into her throat for him to safely land on after being swallowed (and incidentally letting him see into her stomach) that she could more easily just elevator him up on once they're done?
Chobin
2021-03-27 21:28:56 +0000 UTCWoof! Hot damn, that extra page really adds a lot~
Chobin
2021-03-27 21:25:36 +0000 UTCoh wow, wasn't too far from what I could somewhat read on the thumbnails lol also the extension turned out great, dunno what is it about it but the time pressure added to the thrill for sure~
Gum-k
2021-03-27 21:04:45 +0000 UTCI really can't wait colored version of this comic, it so good and funny at the same time.😍
Dragon _hero76
2021-03-27 20:34:04 +0000 UTC
