WIP : Passiontail Isle 01 - Thumbnails 22-27 (finished)
Added 2021-03-19 02:44:29 +0000 UTCEvening! I was meant to be resting today but i was going a little stir crazy, so I did saturday's work, today.
All that's left before i can start on finished pages is
1) moving these into the full size Project Doc pages.
2) Lettering those pages (with some copypaste from here, where applicable)
I also want to have some kind of like, Welcome to Passiontail Isle post, that explains the setting etc for people, but i don't want to delay final color art any further, so i guess that isn't necessary.
When I have all the pages lettered, I'll post them all here like i did last time, so you can read through it properly. I know the microscopic text in the thumbnail pages is real difficult to read, it's really just there for like, space/composition reasons.
Anyway! I hope you guys enjoy this! It's a bit spicier than the original vision for it, but I'm pretty happy with it.
Also! I made some models for reference~
And as a bonus here's a bunch of dumb screenshots of them
(adding after post)
edit : I think I need to add a page between 22 and 23, there’s no big spread page in this comic, and there’s two climaxes on those two pages but they share a lot of room with other shots. I think we’re going to get a big wet internal while he soaks in the afterglow in a precarious position
Comments
The last panel of 22 has the best expression of the comic. I’d definitely recommend an intro page/comic/thing but given the standalone nature of the stories you can just do that whenever you get some spare time. No need to delay this story if you don’t want. And whole extra page to spread out the climax? I won’t say no to more content!
Commander672
2021-03-19 12:06:01 +0000 UTCman , you weren't lying about the potential cliffhanger back then lol seriously though, this is amazingly done and possibly the most appealing way for everyone too, you don't see stories this fun very often out there. keep up the good work^^
Gum-k
2021-03-19 07:24:22 +0000 UTCthe shots in these pages are amazing! with a telekinetic ability like that, she probably could have brought him back up after a little fumbling if she did accidently swallow. Can't wait to see this comic fully fleshed out!~
Scarletmenace
2021-03-19 05:17:12 +0000 UTCOh, interesting direction this time around! I had figured she would do something like that just in case, now we know. That little guy is in good hands~ Keep up the great work!
Rider
2021-03-19 04:14:47 +0000 UTCOh my goodness, intense and spicy there~! Glad she was able to yoink our smaller friend back up. Very exciting developments~
wugfish
2021-03-19 03:50:22 +0000 UTCAnd now that they know she can yank him out of her throat, maybe she'll explore pulling things out of her stomach in her private time for safer future sessions!
Chobin
2021-03-19 03:09:17 +0000 UTCSure sure, then suddenly the R&R becomes a sketch session before ya know it 😏
Unshao
2021-03-19 02:56:39 +0000 UTCgoing places no pockoon has gone before, hopefully!
InsomniacOvrLrd
2021-03-19 02:52:36 +0000 UTCI know! Its just a schedule rearrangement, today and tomorrow, instead of tomorrow and the next day.
InsomniacOvrLrd
2021-03-19 02:51:55 +0000 UTCI'm sure you can understand why i didn't want to leave the last session off with page 22 lol. And it's not the most accurate telekinesis, she had to feel around a bit and yank before she was sure, but it got the job done
InsomniacOvrLrd
2021-03-19 02:51:28 +0000 UTCNear-swallowing is super hot! Poor guy, at least he got a nice orgasm out of it?
NimbleLatios
2021-03-19 02:50:54 +0000 UTCThat almost went very bad very fast for our poor mouse friend. Thank goodness for super accurate psychic levitation, eh?
TwistedAlly
2021-03-19 02:48:12 +0000 UTCGlad your as hype for this as we are but Dont. Skip. Rest. Days.
Unshao
2021-03-19 02:47:02 +0000 UTC
