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Kaylee 15 preview

I feel like I should let people know in advance, in case it's not clear from previews, this chapter is going to be focused on Kayla. It's also a bit quieter and more dramatic than earlier chapters in the series. Next chapter is going to be much bigger and more explosive, but I wanted to lay some groundwork first.

Kaylee 15 preview

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Nope, no plans to include Krystal

Redfiredog

Looking forward to it, would we see krystal in this one? It's been a long time since she appeared

John

I genuinely liked the previous Kayla instalment with Kaylee always looming in the background. From the perspective of the people below it really gave her a sence of scale, plus the cowering and general fear came across stronger I thought? The only thing I felt was lacking in the last Kayla chapter was some quick Kaylee quips? Not necesscesarily for them to be directed towards Kayla, but just as off-screen, open ended lines of dialogue she seldom says. Kinda to just give the feel that Kaylee's still enjoying herself and is never too far away? But really looking forward to it! :)

Hew Draper


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