HP - Shadow Monarch - Chapter 233 - The Unpleasant Venom.
Added 2025-07-21 07:15:54 +0000 UTC[Chapter Size: 2200 Words.]
Third Person POV
Evans' House.
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Severus sat at the Evansâ table, while Lilyâs father remained quite open with him, continuing to talk about his vinyl record collection, letting a Led Zeppelin album play in the living room as they listened from the kitchen.
Severus gave his opinion on what he knew. He didnât know much, but just enough to have a friendly conversation. He was becoming quite interested in the Muggle world and wanted to understand more about that universe.
When he was at Hogwarts last year, he had occasionally been buying magazines about businesses and companies, pop culture, music, the scientific field, academic studies, and even the automobile industry.
He was interested in many things, and for him, it was easy to talk to Mr. Evansâmuch more than he had ever done before.
It was a bit strange, as Mr. Evans himself had harbored a certain dislike for him after his falling out with his daughter in their fifth year at Hogwarts. Not that he could blame him for thatâeven the previous Snape had felt that dislike like a blade stabbed into his heart the moment he saw them during the holidays that year, when the man gave him a look as Severus walked down the street. After all, they judged him by his own actions, and that created a natural distance.
But things had changed since he received the invitation. So he had come out of a moral obligation and was genuinely surprised by the friendly change between them.
In the same way, the feeling seemed to be mutual. The man was quite enthusiastic as he spoke, while Mrs. Evans, finishing setting the table, placing everything that was missing, gave a few glances at Severus, watching him with surprise.
Lily sat silently in her chair after helping her mother. She didnât feel comfortable stepping into the conversation between Severus and her father, and she even seemed unsure of how to deal with the new Severus. But she was amazed at how he and her father were having such an open conversation.
Miss Evans finished the table and quickly went to the living room.
âPetunia, the table is served. I hope youâll come eat with us!â she shouted.
Suddenly, the doorbell rang at the same moment.
âWho could it be?â Mrs. Evans murmured, approaching, while even her husband raised an eyebrow in the kitchen, curious.
âItâs Venom!â Petuniaâs voice suddenly exclaimed from the stairs as she ran to the door.
âYou didnât say he was coming!â she asked. Though she wasnât angry.
âI invited him. He came,â replied Petunia with a gloomy look.
âLook, young lady, youâre not going to speak to me like that.â
Miss Evans touched her daughterâs shoulder before she could open the door, while Petunia made a face.
âI donât care what you think of Severus, but heâs there in the living room as our guest. Someone who saved all of us. Iâm not going to allow you to disrespect him openly like you did before. Are we clear? So I want you to behave, Petunia,â she said in a very serious tone.
Petunia still frowned.
âI know... Iâll try,â she said through gritted teeth, seeming to swallow her pride for everything that had happened. She couldnât let go of it all so easily.
âVenom!â Petunia said as she opened the door, seeing a chubby young man enter with a bouquet of blue flowers in his hand.
âI finally managed to find some time for you, my dear. Here.â
He handed them to her, and she accepted with a smile, giving him a small kiss on the cheek before running to the kitchen, while he stepped inside, shooting a nasty look at Severus.
âVenom is here?â Mr. Evans commented as he watched his daughter filling a pitcher with water and placing the flowers inside.
âVenom gave me these,â she announced. âAt least he knows how to behave.â
But she didnât miss the chance to comment with a venomous tone.
âPetunia!â It was Lily who spoke in a stern tone.
As Petunia was about to respond, she saw her mother entering the kitchen with an equally stern look, and Venom was right behind her. She fell silent.
âVenom, itâs good to see you,â Mr. Evans commented, raising an eyebrow.
âIâm here, Mr. Evans. I heard what happened and came to see how my Petunia and your family are doing, with great concern.â
He spoke, giving a scowling glance toward the boy who had his back to him at the table, sitting beside Petuniaâs sister, while Lily greeted him with a nod, being friendly, but Severus didnât even seem to care about Venomâs presence.
That made Venom irritated as he remembered the moment when Severus had chased him off after catching them together last year.
âCome on, Venom. Sit here,â Petunia said in a cheerier tone, and Venom followed her, sitting down beside her at the table, now facing Severus.
The latter looked at Venom for the first time. For the first time, that gaze seemed to shine with an unnatural blue, making Venom freeze for a moment. He swallowed hard but quickly recovered, thinking he was seeing things.
The table fell silent for a moment, as Miss Evans took her seat.
âLetâs start eating,â she requested, while everyone served themselves.
âDaddy, did you know that Venom is doing really well in his internship at the company where he works?â Petunia began, casting a mocking look at Lily, seemingly showing off.
Mr. Evans turned to Petunia and Venom with a smile.
âIs that the internship you mentioned? Amazing that youâre already doing well at your age,â Mr. Evans said.
âOf course! My father helped a lot by talking to his friend about the job, and Iâll be the man who surpasses him when I start my own family,â Venom said as he held Petuniaâs hand, making her blush, and Mr. Evans nodded, pleased.
Then Venomâs gaze turned to Severus.
âSo, are you dating Petuniaâs sister?â he asked, as Severus lifted his eyes to him, catching Venom off guard once again, before returning to normal, still thinking the chubby guy was seeing things. Something about Severus deeply bothered himâhe just didnât know what.
âNo, heâs not my boyfriend,â Lily corrected, a little embarrassed.
Severus simply nodded. He knew that this little guy was quite annoying and was doing his best to keep his shadows under control, so they wouldnât lash out at him.
âI think Petunia talked about you,â Venom spoke again, while Mr. Evans frowned, and even Miss Evans kept a sharp look.
âI imagine it mustâve been lovely things,â Severus mocked.
Petunia clenched her teeth, but a look from her mother made her stay quiet. Still, she couldnât stand hearing Severus mock her like that.
âI heard your father was a drunk. I feel sorry for Petuniaâs sister,â he began.
âWhat do you mean?â Lily clenched her teeth, staring at this man like a hawk, someone she also found very unpleasant.
âWell, youâre not lying,â Severusâs voice interrupted everyone before they could respond. He had no problem saying it. It was the truth.
He didnât like his father, never wanted to see that man again, and even felt a bit satisfied for having beaten him up a few times. Not that he was proud of hitting someone so weak, but that bastard deserved it.
âWell, good thing you know. Then you must also know that you have a tendency to be like him. Thatâs why I feel sorry for Lilyâs brother. Sheâll have to live with a man like your mother did,â Venom said, and the entire table went silent.
âVenom!â It was Lilyâs father who began to speak.
âHow dare you come into this house and mock my guest?â
He spoke in such a dangerous tone that even Petunia was startled.
Walter was satisfied with it and didnât regret it, even if Mr. Evans was angry.
âHow dare you? Severus is nothing like his father!â
It was Lily who slammed her hand on the table.
Meanwhile, Venom just looked at Severus, waiting to see his reaction. Their eyes met for a moment. They seemed to shine dangerously once again, making Venom fall silent the next moment as sweat began to drip down his face immediately. He wondered what that was.
âVenom, are you okay?â Petunia noticed the change and touched him with concern, as he finally seemed to snap out of his trance, looking once again at Severus, seeing that he no longer had that gaze. He thought, for the third time, that he must be imagining things.
âPetunia, if you donât stop your boyfriend from being rude to our guest, Iâll ask both of you to leave this house until Severus is gone. Are we clear?â Mr. Evans said in a very serious tone.
âAll right, Daddy,â Petunia murmured. Although she wanted Venom to stand out against those weirdos, she still had respect for her father.
âSo, Severus, I remember you used to have some interest in motorcycles,â Mr. Evans spoke again, trying to change the subject.
âYes, I saw you have a T140 in the garage, donât you?â
âYou saw it?â The man broke into a wide smile. âAnd it looks like you already know the model. I love my Triumph T140.â
âYes. Iâve been researching some engines, and I like that engine with over 700 cc,â Severus commented, drawing a rather surprised look from Mr. Evans and even from Lily, with his interest in engines.
Severus had been studying a way to create something to leave this world. So, obviously, he needed to understand the mechanics of this world and see how advanced they were in order to try to build an interstellar ship that could travel between worlds. Obviously, there was no way to surpass the speed of light, but there were technologies that could make someone shift position quickly, creating a kind of wormhole between one atom in this galaxy and another point, for instant travel.
Thatâs how inter-world travel worked â and how the Order acted to protect the worlds.
âOh, so youâre thinking of buying a car? Can you afford one?â Venom suddenly spoke again, grinning.
âMy dadâs going to buy an Austin Allegro once I finish my internship and get hired at the company,â he began boasting with great pride.
âActually, I already have a few cars,â Severus said, making everyone at the table turn to look at him.
âYou already have cars?â Mr. Evans was the one to ask, surprised.
âYou could say so. Well, like I said, Iâm studying engines, and I also bought a T140 for myself. I actually have three of those. But I also bought a Ferrari 365 GT4 BB and a Lamborghini Countach LP400, which are very good engines. I have more than 100 cars, to be honest, but Iâm thinking of dismantling them all,â Severus said.
âBut those cars cost a fortune!â Miss Evans murmured. Even Venom went silent at that moment, and Petunia had a stunned look on her face.
âSeverus is a lord now, dear,â it was Lily who spoke.
âOh, thatâs true. Well, I suppose money isnât a problem for you anymore. But Iâm surprised youâre still interested in engines, even being a...â
Mr. Evans was about to say, but Venom interrupted, looking at Severus full of rage.
âA lying freak!â he suddenly shouted, drawing everyoneâs attention.
âWhat is this?â Miss Evans looked horrified at Venomâs outburst.
âDo you really believe someone like him, with the drunk father he has, would have all that?â he said, outraged.
âHeâs lying! A liar!â
Mr. Evans suddenly slammed the table and stood up.
âI could even try to explain this to you, but youâve insulted my guest once again and broken my request. Iâm certain Severus isnât lying. He really has become someone very important in their world, and money wouldnât be a problem for him now, after everything heâs done,â Mr. Evans said angrily.
âBut it was because of him that we got hurt, Dad! How can you talk to Venom like that?â Petunia suddenly shouted, and chaos broke out.
Venom ignored Mr. Evansâs anger and pointed at Severus.
âWas it you who caused them to get hurt?!â he said, trying to play the white knight.
âIâm not proud of it,â Severus admitted, though he didnât care one bit about Venomâs rage.
âYou bastard!â Venom exclaimed, lunging at Severus, while Miss Evans screamed in fright.
Severus caught Venomâs fist. He knew the chubby boy was afraid of him. He was no longer that skinny kidânow he had an athletic, tall build. Venom normally wouldnât mess with him, but he was full of rage.
Severus simply twisted his arm, making Venomâs expression shift from fury to pain as he cried out, writhing, leaning his body to the side, trying to stop Severus from breaking it or doing something worse.
In the end, lunch with the Evans family turned into complete chaos.
Comments
Wow, what an idiot. Petunia need a reality check too.
Iori Daemona Angel
2025-07-21 18:55:25 +0000 UTCShould break HIM Snape has put down worse for such disrespect smh make him think he's safe till he leave that house đ
GhostOfApocalypse
2025-07-21 15:37:49 +0000 UTC