Comic (Pages 6-10)
Added 2021-09-28 10:46:05 +0000 UTCHi guys. And here is the continuation of the comic.
I will send you all the pages in high resolution on October 3-5.
I so hope that I didn't make many mistakes in the dialogues. Ρ ) But I really tried
Comments
This keeps getting better!
non_user
2021-09-30 04:50:19 +0000 UTCMaybe a bubble about waiting 30 minutes before swimming. ;)
squarenuts
2021-09-29 13:16:37 +0000 UTCThank you Header! If you like it, then of course I will make more pages :)
Julia Tixnen
2021-09-29 09:03:40 +0000 UTCI think you're right, I need to find someone who can help me with this :)
Julia Tixnen
2021-09-29 09:02:25 +0000 UTCOh No! xD I didn't want this "kick" to look so rude. It was supposed to look more sexy xD But I'm glad you found something funny about it. :)
Julia Tixnen
2021-09-29 09:01:21 +0000 UTCOh, those comic idea is great! I love it! Hope u will continue doing more pages and different type of comics in the near future ;v
Header
2021-09-29 07:59:26 +0000 UTCStill liking this comic :) And about the dialogue, I didn't notice any mistakes. Like Rixxos said, I'm sure there are people here who could help you with the dialogue if you want some help.
TeamAlmariel
2021-09-28 16:13:47 +0000 UTCGood old "This is Sparta" rule of fighting
TeamAlmariel
2021-09-28 15:49:50 +0000 UTCDoes she not have to yell the name the place is called when kicking someone? ;) https://youtu.be/eZeYVIWz99I
squarenuts
2021-09-28 13:23:13 +0000 UTCI'm sure there are people in your community who could help if you're concerned about mistakes in the dialogue. Looking forward for more!
2021-09-28 12:39:35 +0000 UTCIβm a bit confused all in all lol, but this is interesting!
CAsh
2021-09-28 10:58:46 +0000 UTCI like where this is going :-)
David Giffin
2021-09-28 10:49:33 +0000 UTC
