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Comic (Pages 6-10)

Hi guys. And here is the continuation of the comic.

I will send you all the pages in high resolution on October 3-5.

I so hope that I didn't make many mistakes in the dialogues. Ρ…) But I really tried

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Comments

This keeps getting better!

non_user

Maybe a bubble about waiting 30 minutes before swimming. ;)

squarenuts

Thank you Header! If you like it, then of course I will make more pages :)

Julia Tixnen

I think you're right, I need to find someone who can help me with this :)

Julia Tixnen

Oh No! xD I didn't want this "kick" to look so rude. It was supposed to look more sexy xD But I'm glad you found something funny about it. :)

Julia Tixnen

Oh, those comic idea is great! I love it! Hope u will continue doing more pages and different type of comics in the near future ;v

Header

Still liking this comic :) And about the dialogue, I didn't notice any mistakes. Like Rixxos said, I'm sure there are people here who could help you with the dialogue if you want some help.

TeamAlmariel

Good old "This is Sparta" rule of fighting

TeamAlmariel

Does she not have to yell the name the place is called when kicking someone? ;) https://youtu.be/eZeYVIWz99I

squarenuts

I'm sure there are people in your community who could help if you're concerned about mistakes in the dialogue. Looking forward for more!

I’m a bit confused all in all lol, but this is interesting!

CAsh

I like where this is going :-)

David Giffin


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