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The previous post was for everyone, now I would like to talk to you about the new page. 

We all know from PBB Legacy who the Clan member who gave William the directions to find Bon Bon was, but as I said, that comic version was very hasty and my partner didn't care about the story, so it made me feel guilty about waste pages with more details.

I believe that the note written by Dorian mattered, because it is really impossible to find Bon Bon without someone sharing the secret with you. There is also that old railway, so old that no one would ever notice or take ... if they didn't know where it leads!

That letter had to come out sooner or later. So among the many adjustments to the story, I think it plausible that Betty trusted to introduce William to Mr Blue precisely because there was that note, written by Dorian, which gave William a sort of recommendation.

In Bon Bon the First Law is not to ask who you are or ask questions, so William did not have to show his documents ... because there is only one way to get to Bon Bon, that is through the word of mouth of someone who trusts you so much that they share with you the secret!

But Hans had seen it right, suspecting that William might have arrived by chance, because he didn't seem to know how to behave in Bon Bon, because Dorian hadn't had time to instruct him ... it was a decision made with courage and speed.

But Dorian somehow trusted William. Will he have done well? :)

V.

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Right! :) but that easter egg she is was also hidden on page 38! ;) Yes, it is a train (on page 23) older than a few decades, but still functional, it is the one that Simon Blue used when he was young and visited the valley, before Bon Bon was born and he did not allow it to be modernized so as not to discover the city to other people. The main story is the same, but Will hasn't always been a misogen and you'll see that from now on! So ... something changed to make him that character.

Vanessa San

Yep! But she is was also hidden on page 38! ;)

Vanessa San

Starlight Glimmer on the bed! Violet does love unicorns :) I wondered about that train; it looked so old even for the time period. I wonder how they are going to pitch the job to him. Is William a misogynist in this version? And is Betty gonna blackmail him this time :P

Erold

Thank you for the secrets behind the page and the discovery of Dorian's note to William, Vanessa. :D I think that makes perfect sense for Betty to have William to go to see Mr Blue (with Miss Io informing her discoveries to Betty). ^_^ This is a lot better to how he got the job versus what happened in the Legacy chapter. :)

Kanbe Namura

Do I spy a Starlight Glimmer on the bed?


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