Undercover, Part 4 (Finale)
Added 2022-08-20 01:19:10 +0000 UTCThank you to everyone who voted!
The winner of the poll was "Peter succeeds in taking control of both cartels and becomes the undisputed Queen of the Underworld."
I've had so much fun telling Peter's story. With this post, I've included all the previous parts so you can read his tale straight through. Overall, there are 14 pages! The last five are "Part 4."
I can't wait to hear what you think of the end (?) of Peter's story. π
Comments
Oooh, that's a VERY fun idea, Jess! Yes, I might steal that indeed! π
Emory Ahlberg
2023-08-19 15:53:03 +0000 UTCThis was a great story, but it made me think of a premise that seemed exciting. Some sort of criminal boss, maybe the leader of a gang or a drug cartel. The people that work for him are compensated handsomely, but in order to get into that inner circle you have to show your loyalty by sacrificing your gender. So all of his folks are reluctant trans women. Some choose to make the change to live the good life, some are more coerced. The low level folks in the household....servants, etc.....are former enemies or people that have wronged him in some way who were also transformed. Seems like something you could do a lot with!
Jessica Thence
2023-08-19 15:46:12 +0000 UTCHard to choose really. Last one I think.
MaggieHeels
2022-08-21 22:14:48 +0000 UTCThanks so much, Pelican. Yes, Helen was definitely a wrench thrown into Peterβs plans. There was definitely a chance that she could have spoiled everything, resulting in Diego learning the truth about his βwife.β π¬
Emory Ahlberg
2022-08-21 18:10:06 +0000 UTCβ€οΈ Thanks so much, maven. This was a really fun one!
Emory Ahlberg
2022-08-21 18:08:19 +0000 UTCThank you, Maggie! What was your favorite part?
Emory Ahlberg
2022-08-21 18:07:55 +0000 UTCThanks so much, Allan! It was really fun to explore Peter / Mayaβs story so in-depth.
Emory Ahlberg
2022-08-21 18:07:35 +0000 UTCI really enjoyed this story. Thank you for your great effort.
Allan Kim
2022-08-21 07:05:02 +0000 UTCElla, you have to have a record for choosing the "wrong" polling option π. I'm sorry that keeps happening to you! But I'm so happy you enjoyed the conclusion to Peter's / Maya's story.
Emory Ahlberg
2022-08-20 23:20:21 +0000 UTCThank you, Terry! π Luckily, that will be tomorrow.
Emory Ahlberg
2022-08-20 23:19:22 +0000 UTCAwesome story Emory! Can't wait for your next creation.
Terry Rose
2022-08-20 22:52:20 +0000 UTCOf course my choice didnβt win the poll again, but of course I love it all the same as always! π what a great story, Emory! Thanks and congrats! β€οΈ
Ella Cherry
2022-08-20 21:49:38 +0000 UTCOMFG... ahhhhh my mind is blown away...
MaggieHeels
2022-08-20 15:59:05 +0000 UTCExcellent story and images! Thank you
maven poulter
2022-08-20 12:47:08 +0000 UTCAlso "I don't mean to be disrespectful, but where did you come up with the idea of transforming men into women?" Maya, sweating, closing a browser tab which is open on patreon.com/emoryahlberg: "It came to me in a dream."
Alyson Greaves
2022-08-20 12:29:18 +0000 UTC(whoops, I left these comments in the app, no idea why they didn't thread properly)
Alyson Greaves
2022-08-20 12:27:24 +0000 UTCThis has been a great story although not the ending I was hoping for. I really liked the introduction of Helen, a person which could have turned things pretty disastrous for Peter. Maybe a "what if" second ending could show a much darker outcome for Pete, not death of course, but a resulting new freedom less life of sexual exploitation.
Pelicanboss
2022-08-20 05:21:20 +0000 UTClmao π€£
Alyson Greaves
2022-08-20 01:46:21 +0000 UTCπ€£ Davis: "I was a conventional family man and then-" All the girls at once: "SHUT UP, DAVIS."
Emory Ahlberg
2022-08-20 01:43:11 +0000 UTCConversations on the island: Maya: "So, how'd you get started? For me it was a drug bust gone wrong, and then there was a marriage and a little light murder." Holly: "Oh, there was a war between exorbitantly rich men. One of them was my father, and he lost." Jill: "...I was a surfer." Maya: "Like, the leader of a gang of drug-smuggling surfers, or something?" Jill: "No. Just a surfer." Maya: "Wow. You people really run the gamut, don't you?"
Alyson Greaves
2022-08-20 01:39:37 +0000 UTCThank you!!! π I'm wondering how long it will be before she fully accepts her "Maya" identity -- and gets an invitation to join Second Dawn. π
Emory Ahlberg
2022-08-20 01:31:40 +0000 UTCToo sleepy to be effusive but Peter's story has been fantastic π
Alyson Greaves
2022-08-20 01:23:39 +0000 UTC
