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Underwater

Went with second person narration. It was fun!



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Exhausted from your long walk home, you approach the pool. Well, more specifically, you approach your ex-wife’s pool. She owns everything now, including you. Still, you’re looking forward to a swim after a long day at the strip club. You sit carefully and removed your high heels with a sigh. Life was so much easier as a man. Back then, you could do whatever you wanted, especially with women. Now? Now you’re the one who gets used without consequence.


But a terrible mistake took your male life forever. When your ex-wife, Jackie, caught you having an affair with her best friend, it took all her willpower not to beat the both of you to death with a baseball bat. Instead, she did what any good wife should do: She took out her anger on you.


Jackie hired a service to kidnap you, drug you, and operate on you. You woke up every couple of weeks to find yourself strapped to a table after yet another surgery. The first was the worst, though. That’s when they inverted your dick and made you female. You’d almost lost your mind from the horror and pain. What made the whole ordeal worse was that Jackie was there to “comfort you” after each operation.


Eventually, with the estrogen and many surgeries, no trace of your old self remained. Instead, there was the city’s newest blonde bombshell. You hate being a woman. It isn’t just the humiliation of wearing panties and having your body mutilated for pleasure; it’s the constant monitoring by your ex-wife, who takes great pleasure in your pain. She even ordered them to shorten the tendons in your calves so you can only wear heels if you want to walk. The worst part? She makes you hike to work and back home in your little stripper outfits. The lustful gazes of men and the disapproving glares of women is like torture. They think you’re a whore!


You’ve tried to escape, but Jackie has been watching you the entire time. She knows exactly where you are 24/7. So you take your peace where you can, like in a pleasant swim. But you need to be quick. Jackie and her new husband will be home soon. She’ll want you to make dinner, and he’ll want a free lap dance.


You dive into the pool and stay underwater for as long as you can, holding your breath. It’s dark and quiet there. Nobody can hurt you when you’re underwater.

Underwater

Comments

Thanks, Jess! I may do that again soon. It was fun!

Emory Ahlberg

Interesting idea to go with second person. I really enjoyed it!

Jessica Thence

LOL - I agree, Jen! And a free lap dance? That's nothing!

Emory Ahlberg

God, some people can be so ungrateful! Her ex allows her to stay in a nice house with a great pool and sets her up with not one but two jobs! In this economy? And all those surgeries? Cooking dinner is a small price to pay to repay such kindness.

Jennifer

Thank you, Storm! I'm so glad!

Emory Ahlberg

LOL - Sounds like you know from experience.

Emory Ahlberg

Thanks, Ella!!! Did it make "you" feel something? Hehe.

Emory Ahlberg

io love this storie !!! first person is not my

Stormfries

Love the story and love the narration style! Thanks Emory! ❤️

Ella Cherry

Be careful.....wearing heels near a swimming pool can end in disaster LoL x

stacy C


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