NHRK Poll in regards to Chapter 71
Added 2023-11-07 11:21:09 +0000 UTCWere you guys overall satisfied with the R-rated scene in chapter 71?
I feel that I should go back and change the chapter to add more anticipation, more teasing before the 'act'. Since this is the major scene we've been building up to, I felt like it needed a bit more oomph...like a pre-sex shower scene, coming full circle to the earlier chapters.
What do you guys think?
P.S: I sound like a broken record, but I'm sorry that the chapters aren't coming out as quickly as I want it to. After next week, I will only have one exam left (rather than being drowned by the eight major assessments like I am now), and there will be christmas break after that, so I should have more time to write then. For now, it may just be a chapter per week for this week and next week. Gomenasai.
Comments
If any Naruto and Kushina sex scene should have been longer if anything
God of Wind 200
2023-11-07 23:39:25 +0000 UTCIn my opinion the scene felt rushed compared to others in this story so far, especially when this was the one I been waiting for 😂 but it was good non the less
Vamble
2023-11-07 17:08:23 +0000 UTC
