Divine Apostasy Book 6 - Chapter 43
Added 2022-01-22 10:49:49 +0000 UTCThis book is now published on KU. KU has rules requiring no more than 10% of a book be available by other means. Due to this restriction, I have removed this chapter.
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Comments
I've made a note to make this clearer. Thank you!
A. F. Kay
2022-01-29 06:18:16 +0000 UTCThank you so much!!!
A. F. Kay
2022-01-29 06:18:04 +0000 UTCThank you!
A. F. Kay
2022-01-29 06:17:54 +0000 UTCLightNing arced from one of the creatures,
Joe
2022-01-26 09:06:18 +0000 UTCI'm not sure it's clear enough that he's using the spear to guide his fall. I was slightly confused in the next chapter, and had to come back to confirm there was a reason for his hand to be experiencing friction.
Daemon Shade
2022-01-22 20:39:10 +0000 UTCA couple instances of "lighting" instead of lightning. "as the plummeted closer" s/the/they I'd recommend hyphenating "instant cast" when he uses Fallen Heroes, to improve sentence cadence and readability, but I'm honestly not sure if that's grammatically correct or not.
Daemon Shade
2022-01-22 20:31:28 +0000 UTC
