I Sissified My Step Bro Book 3 Prologue
Added 2025-03-20 10:28:51 +0000 UTCHey Guys,
I am already working on the third book. I would love to hear feedback, and I hope you all have a great night.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1INABdN0Ws88-bup9XaR4X0U2YL_2xvOUz-f1immdVB8/edit?usp=sharing
Comments
Yes!. Book 3 is back. This was great, can't wait for more to come.
Shamim
2025-03-22 23:56:12 +0000 UTCLike it. The different pov are good like in the 2 chapters before. The sissy pov is great to see how the she changes and what happens to her. Dont know if you write it forward but would be good to know what happened in the time after they got home from the shopping trip with her now wearing woman clothes and how it was at home. Looking forward what will come next. Would write more variants then cock. There are so many words for it and with different meaning and "power" behind it. And a generally tip: use all senses when you describe something. You already do a good job with feeling and i think tasting but you are missing smell. I read a novel recently that did a good job describing things with all sensens. (dont know if i can tell it here so better i dont do it)
SirCoffee
2025-03-20 19:29:06 +0000 UTC
