Pillow Store WIP
Added 2016-11-15 00:17:11 +0000 UTCOk, time to get serious.... Damn, my sketches feel so messy >_<
Do you guys like it? or would you prefer a step-by-step picture of a girl being transformed into a pillow ?
Comments
Step-by-step of girl(s) transformed into pillows please!
Friendly Neighborhood Eldritch Horror
2016-11-17 04:04:05 +0000 UTCIf you're up for doing both, I think an additional illustration showing one of these pillows being made would be great and make for a really nice story. I'd also be interested in making this picture wider so we get to see a few more girls on that 50 percent off shelf
Shark
2016-11-16 15:58:52 +0000 UTCI like those quads. however I not like transformed into a pillow.Please feel free to draw.
PORUTAERU
2016-11-16 09:03:13 +0000 UTCKeep going with this!
mkb
2016-11-16 06:39:43 +0000 UTCI'd love both, but if i had to choose, I would want a step-by-step transformation.
Paj
2016-11-15 17:55:16 +0000 UTCI wish we had such shop in Berlin…
2016-11-15 11:07:10 +0000 UTCThe life of a pillow must be very boring.
Random-Rambling
2016-11-15 04:47:11 +0000 UTCI would personally prefer the step-by-step of a girl transformed into a pillow, but this is still great. I have to agree with Cryptophore on his latter comment, assuming you choose this one to continue with. Looking at the WIP, I would say the man walking into the store is the focus of the image and the pillow girls are just the background. I think there should be emphasis on the pillow girls, maybe center on a shelf like the one on the right with several pillows and a sales sign somewhere. Just my two cents.
Crow
2016-11-15 04:06:38 +0000 UTCThe concept is neat and the pillow girls are great, but I feel it would be even better if the focus were on the pillows instead.
Cryptophore
2016-11-15 02:04:38 +0000 UTCAll I know is I'm buying the middle pillow on that 50% off shelf!
2016-11-15 01:22:09 +0000 UTCgreat picture - but "Both"!
thrandrall
2016-11-15 00:57:50 +0000 UTCThe answer is yes.
J. Jenny Jameson
2016-11-15 00:35:27 +0000 UTCAs not to waste this picture, how bout doing the step by step thing in reverse? all the way back her seeing him when she was full bodied?
Wolvun
2016-11-15 00:32:21 +0000 UTCCan we pick 'and'? This is cute, and has lots of story implications. But I'd also find a process piece fascinating...
David Fenger
2016-11-15 00:22:34 +0000 UTC
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