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New Section! "Share your thoughts".

We always like to read your comments, specially when you express yourselves.

There's a lot of things we would love to hear your thoughts about, and since the new episode has been released, it's a good excuse to begin!

So, on this very first post, we would like you...

SHARE YOUR THOUGHTS ABOUT... The Darklady Adventures Special - My Sex Therapy.

Feel free to express whatever you want about it! We'll be reading and aswering all of you comments!

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New Section! "Share your thoughts".

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Once again this series puts a lot of television productions to shame with how well done the art and animation is. I really like the amount of effort you've put into Darkie's characterization taking what's essentially a sex romp into a character study it makes the frame work for all the scenes transition well without making it random. The sex itself are short but sweet (once again no graphic penetration though) and are well drawn and paced ever since episode 5 you guys have just nailed that aspect so well that the length doesn't really matter that much. The highlight of course is the wrestling scene which is a tour de force of action and character study. I really love how Darkie is portrayed throughout because you could have gone the easy route and portrayed her as a deranged psychopath instead she's just rather frank with what she wants and what she expects from others without venturing into stereotypical "strong woman" Hollywood writing she comes off as human throughout this special so props to the writing team for doing what so many can't do with female leads.

Dorda

Darklady vs other women (dark lady type) in wrestling and boxing both and add some belly punch , belly knees,knees and kick low blow beat up of darklady and her purple hair friend too make a whole episode on this and NO MORE MEN'S ONLY WOMEN'S VS WOMEN'S

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There will!

Sweet Pea

You can do it by DM!

Sweet Pea

I would tell you my specific issue only if you want to know. I am being careful because I don’t want to risk offend anyone.

Moralis

I will say that I did like the idea of the short and thought the sex scenes were well done. There is just one thing that I didn’t care for that some may disagree with but it is simply just preference. I do look forward to seeing more animated shorts in the future.

Moralis

Hell of a review! LOL We'll answer you by DM, It may be a bit overwhelming to read for others.

Sweet Pea

The episode overall was amazing. What I feel that it lacked in the way it was created, was the wrestling scene needed a sex scene. Personally I feel that it would have been a lot more fulfilling seeing a lot more sexual action with the grappling scenes in general. If I'm not mistaken the polls usually show the same. As it was I would add way more sexual action with the wrestler, if I had the option to choose who gets action in general I would choose all the wrestlers. In the way that they are drawn there is always a lot of sexual tension and personally ever since episode 1 I always wished Darkie would surrender and just fulfill the desires of whoever defeated her even if just for once. Apart from the tension there is also a gradual progression where they usually rub off each other, stare at her tits during bearhugs, make "sex noises" when wrestling like "yea bitch, take this" to which Darkie usually responds with sexy moaning. So when these characters create anticipation but they don't fuck Darkie and yet for example rangers who we don't even know their name get action, it feels to me gratuitous. Personally if I had the chance to choose the order of priority to fuck Darkie the first one would the frog, then Bobak, then the 2 new frogs, the wrestler and last Shadowboy. Honestly beyond that I consider the male characters irrelevant when it comes to anything sexual. Anyone who grappled and interracted with her or fought with her feels to be a lot more deserving. Lastly when it comes to sexual tension the plot seems to get in its own way, characters have objectives and are strict to them and many times seem one dimensional. Darkie is by far the hottest and also by far the horniest of the female characters and in over 90% of the episodes she is alone in a ship with multiple men. There should be sexual tension outside of conflict caused by the plot aka grappling. If character A is sexually attracted to her, they should pursuit that more. If a super hot girl is walking around with sexy clothes and in the past she gave a blowjob to an intruder strapped in a table, then there should be more pursuit. The men give a lot of "cool anime main character" vibe where sex isn't a priority. For example out of all male characters nobody has feelings for her, they see her a lot like a sexual object but still that is only in a small moment and then it vanishes. In the way that she is portrayed it's hard to believe the others also don't find her attractive, and from her whole crew it seems impossible that nobody does. None of them will show desire or initiate. Darkie as sexually active as she is, she won't use her charms to achieve any goals, even if she's attracted to the person she's up against. The man won't initiate with her no matter how hot she is, I would really love it if the characters behaved in this aspect more like humans and less like 80s action movie star when it came to these things. She walks around with suits which are like thongs, she should be catching people staring at her ass and boobs, or people hitting on her. In some circumstances like when the lights go out because the alarm went off there should be someone naive and stupid taking advantage and groping her. Since she has no issue changing in front of men, they should be bringing her clothes or lingerie to try so they can see her naked. When they have sexual talks with her like Shadowboy asking her if she had sex with the toad, there should be an effect from this. Bobak found her alone, gave her a bearhug and had a perverted look, why not visit her room for a rematch? Why create tension after a bearhug? Why not for example have Bobak or the Toad grope her which starts the sexual tension and it continues with the grappling? In general I think the story is great, I love it because it's fun, it's absurd, it's funny, it's sexy and there is an amazing dynamic with Darkie and guys who want to grapple with her. I would love to see more sexual tension, and not only with wrestling but a lot more outside it where the characters would think like their typical gender profile would dictate. And it doesn't have to be sex, her nipple could pop out during a bear hug and the man could suck it for a few seconds and that's it. Or kiss her with tongue. Or put his hand inside her shirt or down her pants. Or she could be taking a shower and someone is peeping and jerking off. Or men are staring at her ass or getting very touchy with her, they also try to flirt with her more. With the men she flirts, someone should be daring and initiate something, or someone should be perverted and grope her as much as he can. Now I get that the story isn't about romance so I won't mention someone having feelings for her. Let's assume nobody finds her relationship material but in the way she is presented it seems absurd to not find her sexy as a character in this story. Also there is a lot of 0 to 100 where there's the usual action and then here and there a very sexy scene, I would love to see things in between as well. She goes straight for a blowjob, what happened to kissing or griding? Now on a more technical note, it's very hard to create goals and motivations for every character, in writing typically every character should feel like the main character. With NSFW stories an approach which hits multiple birds with 1 stone is the heliocentric approach to the FMC. Dating her or marrying her or charming her or fucking her or whatever becomes one of the main goals of the male characters, so in showing that they have their own goals and motivations they become "real" and not canon fodder. So from the 6 questions you need to have to write a story let's take the first 4 "who is the character", then "what does he/she want" then "why can't they get it" and then "what do they do about it". First question is different for every character, second could be similar, like in One Piece "what does he/she want", it could be to become the pirate king. The same with the male characters, what do they want, they want X or Y or Z AND they also want to fuck Darkie or date darkie or charm darkie or tame darkie, the why could be different but the goal is still her. Episode 5 part 2 she is talking in a room full of men with her back facing them while wearing a thong like suit, nobody had the intention of staring at her ass? She sleeps naked, when she recovered inside the water chamber she was naked, not a single guy wants to peep? Then she meets 2 toads, none of them again got interested in her? 0 out of everyone? Shadowboy in episode 1 is getting a blowjob from Darkie, then it's like he forgets she's super hot and sexually willing, it's like he doesn't have a mind of his own, Darkie wants a blowjob and he obliges, without having a preference in the matter, it all comes down to if Darkie does or doesn't initiate. Without pursuing any desires. The toad says in episode 1 that he has basically a dick and he can't wait to use it and couldn't find a better way to humiliate her. Then after a few scenes with her, it completely vanishes instead of actually escalating and building up. And honestly there is a lot of innuendo or straight up dirty talk. Especially for the ones who wrestle, they will get fully into it, use lines out of a porn, get perverted looks, yet they won't try to escalate it sexually. Even if they know she's willing they still won't pursue. Didn't the same mechanism that made them utter those words exist beyond the scene? Or the mechanism which made them proclaim they want to fuck her in the Toad's case, shouldn't it make him try to get more action? Does it get activated only by grappling? And if it does, shouldn't they escalate sexual activity much more then when they are grappling? To me a lot of scenes with sexual tension, whether they have any NSFW action or not, feel more like "fanservice", sometimes it feels like something to get over with to continue with the plot, rather than a part of the characters which shows desire and sexual activity that the majority of the subs honestly love. A reason in stories that a lot of times people like the villain is due to proactivity, especially if it's associated with abilities. Episode 1 it hits the mark right away, super strong toad appears, sexually attracted to her, proclaimed he wants to fuck her, absurd and funny things happened. In general I would love various forms of escalation, more proactivity by the other characters, I would love to feel more empathy because they feel what they I feel which is "God damn she's hot" in order to root for them and thne root for them to get some action. Finally more diversity, instead of them belonging to the same character trope, I would love to see someone being funny, someone being perverted, someone being annoying etc. Anyways that's my 2 cents. I would love to hear your reply.

Stavros M

It was good too see the dark queen show her strength but very sad to haven't more fight like that with her. Hope to see more of her in wrestling or boxing fight against others characters.

julmc

I love to see a woman in latex got bearhug or beat up rough it's really turn me on

Micheal Myers


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