Thanks! This is the first time I've written a novel. Before I never wrote anything 'artistic' apart from some school assignments. Have you ever published anything of what you've written? Perhaps others think it's good.
SimVenus Arts
2023-03-13 21:14:35 +0000 UTC
I like the detail of Gaby's corset, how this is completed. The story is getting more and
more exciting.
melampo
2023-03-13 19:04:30 +0000 UTC
Ok, didn't see that coming... Very good twist. That's why I'm enjoying your story so much. Are you sure you've never written professionally? My first attempt, as I was writing, I thought. It was very good. Going back to read it a month latter and it was ad if a 3rd grader wrote it😝 keep up the great writing and story twist. Makes it more enjoyable😁