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My Classmate Emma Lindberg - Chapter 25, Page 9

My Classmate Emma Lindberg - Chapter 25, Page 9

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Thanks!

SimVenus Arts

Thanks! This is the first time I've written a novel. Before I never wrote anything 'artistic' apart from some school assignments. Have you ever published anything of what you've written? Perhaps others think it's good.

SimVenus Arts

I like the detail of Gaby's corset, how this is completed. The story is getting more and more exciting.

melampo

Ok, didn't see that coming... Very good twist. That's why I'm enjoying your story so much. Are you sure you've never written professionally? My first attempt, as I was writing, I thought. It was very good. Going back to read it a month latter and it was ad if a 3rd grader wrote it😝 keep up the great writing and story twist. Makes it more enjoyable😁

Robmur


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