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Libby & Holly Pg. 9-10

Whoops surprise there's two pages! 

Didn't get as far on colors before feeling the need to share it with you all this time. What do you think of of the *asterisk-ish thougth clouds? I kind of like how they stay in the background to the dialog, like thoughts are, but I'm not 100% on the furriness alone, maybe they should have a pale fill color so they pop out a liiiittle more? 🤔


Happy Tuesday, everyone! 💖

Libby & Holly Pg. 9-10 Libby & Holly Pg. 9-10

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🖤🖤🖤🖤 I'm glad you're into it so far!

Winton Kidd

I want to see what happen next 🖤

Urfavoritepanda

Thank you Rebecca!!!♥️

Winton Kidd

I think the asterisk clouds work well!

Rebecca Brown

Uh oh!

Rebecca Brown

heheeheee 🥰 I'm trying to expand my capacity for teasing with this work

Winton Kidd

THE ✨TEASE✨

PAN

Holly totally gives off that vibe, yes! I thought she's smug because she totally knows what Libby tries to hide under the last book which is why she left it there. Or maybe it's just Libby-scope - wishful thinking (GAY). Sorry, for whatever reason that really sticks with me from the preview pages 🫣

Fuya

💕💕💕💕💕

Winton Kidd

Me too honestly. I'm going to have fun with them :))))))

Winton Kidd

Happy to supply :)

Winton Kidd

Hehe I like that you think she looks smug. I think Holly is that effortlessly good student that we all wish we were. 🥺

Winton Kidd

🙏🏻 thank you for this high praise! 💕

Winton Kidd

AaaaaaaaaiiiiiiiI love it so much

Aristotle Fellatrix

Ohhh how I can't wait for the next pages 😍

Wuff_Boman

I do like surprises 😁like these.

Leonard Vindel

Holly looks so smug all the time, I love her. Poor Libby, that kind of panic is among the worst 😅 I think the thought bubbles would benefit from a slightly lighter background color.

Fuya

That expression in the last part is so simple yet full of so many different emotions. You can feel the anxiety, the embarrassment, the slight shame in being caught. Chefs kiss 🤌🏽

Rico

Porcupine bubbles is a way better name. Is that what they're called? I could probably handwrite that text and have it feel appropriate since it's more... Gushy and urgent usually. Maybe I'll give that a try later on and see how it feels. Thank you for the wise suggestion Sam! 🙏

Winton Kidd

For the thoughts, maybe change the font a little? I like the porcupine bubbles tho, they're cute

Sam Christopherson


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