Helluva Trio 2 pg 1 draft (script)
Added 2024-08-15 21:43:55 +0000 UTCP1: Shot of an empty plate, picked clean of its eggs and bacon.
MILLIE (off-panel): That was delicious!
P2: Millie compliments Moxxie on the food, but Loona is lost in thought, staring at her plate. (The characters should all be on the same side of the island counter).
MILLIE: Thank you, hun.
MOXXIE: Of course. What about you, Loona?
P3: Loona looks up, realizing she's being spoken to.
MOXXIE: Are you satisfied?
LOONA: Wh-what?
P4: Her eyes narrow.
MOXXIE (off-panel): Was the breakfast enough?
LOONA: Hmm. I guess. But I'd like more next time.
Comments
I do agree, but I'm trying to take a safe approach to this. I know my subscribers like this Helluva Boss content, so I want to keep that going while I push out this more original content with Avatar. I'm pretty sure if I solely focused on the The Vast Gap, with characters no one knows and a story that will take a long time to develop, then I would see a massive drop in support. Doing both at the same time will buy me time to build up the Avatar comic and prove why it's worthy of support.
Swain
2024-08-16 13:47:31 +0000 UTCI might be in the minority, but I'd actually like explore and see the other story about Avatar and Earth. "The Vast Gap Between Us". I will always enjoy a good Loona comic and your artistic talent. Taking a break to develp and share the other story would keep Loona from getting stale and over done. Thank you for sharing your talent and art with us. π
Pinhead
2024-08-16 03:22:09 +0000 UTCoh shit we're just getting right into it
Sid
2024-08-15 21:53:46 +0000 UTCWow itβs right after I thought thereβd be a slight time jump
Erin V123
2024-08-15 21:52:54 +0000 UTC
