Two Minds, One Wand - Chapter Fifty Nine
Added 2023-10-09 15:49:49 +0000 UTCHey guys, so sorry for the wait. This chapter is a beefy 10k, a really hard write that I wanted to make worth your while. It probably needs another proof-read for typos, but my eyes are literally bloodshot from staring at a white screen for so long. Thanks for your patience - we'll be back to regular Friday schedules now.
Lemons are a tricky thing to write - you can only write so many sentences of pounding. My theory is to try and do a few things at the same time, from dialogue, scene changes, outfit changes, character development and realisations of other character's development. I don't know if its better or worse, but I hope you like it. Let me know if you enjoy this chapter.
Fleur will be tricky to write once she's in the Harry-army, I think - much easier to write an unattainable fantasy than a claimed one. But hey, I've got some ideas.
Thanks for the feedback and suggestions from last chapter, it was fun to write around your ideas and include them too.
(Lots of messages in my DMs and I need to clean up Discord too - will try to get my act together).
Thanks for your support guys, and for being on this long journey with me. You are the actual best!
Cheers, Rob.
Comments
I wonder if Harry's first whorecrux will be the Veela Queen? Imagine if Harry can bring her back. I am genuinely wondering what happened to her. I wouldn't be surprised if Sofia has something to do with it. Harry should hold off on attacking the merpeople for sure. The Veela Princess cannot be trusted. She's up to something nefarious.
Kevin Thunder
2023-10-13 06:30:45 +0000 UTCHad to read this brilliant chapter again before the update. Fleur's introduction was very well done. Masterful. Certainly unique. I can't wait till she is fully integrated into the harem. Daphne needs to be punished for sure. What she did may be unforgivable. Hopefully, Susan isnt lost but no matter what happens, I hope she finds happiness. Maybe Hermione can speak to her? I hope Helena stays safe!! Don't you dare touch her Draco! I loved Helena bonding with her classmates finally.
Kevin Thunder
2023-10-13 06:28:22 +0000 UTC
