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Test Short: Neighbour needs a Stand In

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amazing!!!

ron

This was great! Please continue!

JT

Looking forward to this, UA and red flags the most!

GDPMM

I like a bit of tease… but please do more of this story.

SC

There will be! I just need a break to let OFG breath a bit, and to clear out some other stuff, before I bring it back for an Arc 2. I also need to decide if I keep writing it in 2nd Person (you), or switch it to 1st or 3rd person (I, John) for the next arc, and editing the previous one.

BreaktheBar

That must be a relic from when I was setting up the tiers. A long time ago the Reader Club tier had 2 chapters ahead of public posting, and the Alpha tier readers had another 2 ahead of that. That was changed to 3 and 3... well over a year ago, possibly closer to two at this point. I'll look at making sure that gets changed to account for the established norm now.

BreaktheBar

I love this, it’s great as it sits, but I’d definitely not say no to more!

David L

That was a great start! Definitely want to read more!

Jeremy

Since you mentioned QTNW in your post, I have a QTNW question unrelated to your new short story. In the description of your Alpha membership (A Team), it states the A Team gets QTNW content two chapters ahead of the Beta/B Team (me). That’s fair, us B Team folks must exercise patience, that’s the membership model. Not that I’m chomping at the bit for new content, or anything, but it appears for QTNW, A-Team is currently three chapters ahead of B Team (and one of those chapters is a double chapter). So if two chapters in advance is the A Team model, B team might be due a release of September Alpha QTNW content, unless I’m incorrect regarding the tiered framework. Patience is a work in progress…

CA2DC

Alternative perspective, … I initially started reading your stories to avoid blue balls. That was priority #1 and why I was on Lit. Admittedly, at this point, that’s only HALF the reason I’m now a sub, as I’m caught up in some plots. Despite my grey hair, that priority is still core. So I’ll pass on all blue ball content, until that issue/descriptor is rectified.

CA2DC

I'm in agreement. This is a great story and does remind me of your pushing series (the one that got me interested in your work). Please, if you have time, I want more.

Steve Wallace

Sounds very interesting. I’d definitely be interested in the story. Just curious are you going to start a second arc on the Only Fans Girl at anytime? The Onlyfans angle made me think of it.

Brian Blodgett


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