Font of Fertility Ch 34 (Beta)
Added 2024-11-26 05:51:43 +0000 UTCThe following is the Beta Draft of Font of
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when I reread it carefully I did realize it wasn't as off as I thought - maybe it could work as written.
Andrew
2024-12-07 07:02:59 +0000 UTCHmm, thought I changed that. I'll note it for editing!
BreaktheBar
2024-12-04 04:34:37 +0000 UTCNice job. One comment - Lindsey's name shouldn't be Baxley anymore so it seems the thing about the vice-principal stressing Lauren's last name because of Lindsey should be out with the rewrite.
Andrew
2024-12-02 05:04:27 +0000 UTCWorth waiting for and cant wait for more. Looking forward to seeing how Emily is punished
Spacecadet5380
2024-11-27 08:03:06 +0000 UTCMan I seriously need like 20 more chapters of this stat, I love the plot advancement you manage to mix in with fun and I love that not everything has to have an extended sex scene because you get so much crammed into each chapter you put together. I can't wait for this to be completed and published AND I want a hard copy
ReadingRed
2024-11-27 02:06:16 +0000 UTCYeah, FoF is back! Gimme more baby, gimme more *singing. or attempting too*
Darkflint
2024-11-26 17:39:43 +0000 UTCOh we're back! Great chapter of progress on the plot. It feels like the timeline actually moved a fair bit here.
Sindre Bjørnhjell
2024-11-26 16:52:16 +0000 UTCGood to see Jerry and the gang back for us Beta readers :-) It looks like the last six weeks have been a clusterfuck for you, Break - I understand WHY the need for the rewrites - but jeez, I am glad I ain't you :-)
Graham Cairns
2024-11-26 09:40:37 +0000 UTC
