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AMA: The Boyfriend - Chapters 151-200 (Compiled)

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I double check it when I do my big editing pass.

BreaktheBar

Possible continuity issue. Chapter 169 when Robbie is grilling Becca comes out and talks about last time she offered a blowjob, but I am 99.9% certain that it was Wanda that said that.

Michael Duke

Typo: Chapter 163: Pilto’s should be Pilot's

Michael Duke

Typo: chapter 200, Cattie shoved Cattie should be Cattie shoved Cassidy

Michael Duke

"On the other hand, I was spinning plates like crazy. Would one more be too much?" Great line. Kudos. I remember watching those talent shows with my folks in the late 70s/early 80s.

Tipp McClure

I honestly can't remember at this point, but either I just got the detail wrong or I had Cassidy talk about a different multi-girl orgy to downplay her past a little bit. She's trying to be open, but that doesn't mean she won't get embarrassed by the sheer numbers sometimes.

BreaktheBar

Ok so a small point, but Cass told Robbie the orgy was 23 girls but told the game it was 14? Seems like a weird change to me.

Michael Duke

A: the whole Wanda/JC thing is still a weird cliffhanger. The potential of the app makes it much more of an issue, especially since what actually brought it to a breaking point was what happened with the cop, which was Cassidy's fault. While the app is hovering over everything, that's the most obvious instance. B: I was trying to download the pdf so Acrobat will read it to me, but that mean I had to scroll all the way down to the bottom. The Patreon app doesn't bother to render them when I'm scrolling that fast.

FlareNight

Sorry, I'm not sure what you mean by this?

BreaktheBar

I'd be super-annoyed at the cliffhanger if I... wait, that's still a weird cliffhanger that you've just covered because Cattie seems more important. Also, I couldn't actually read it, but I think if you scroll fast enough on the mobile app, Patreon defaults to the title of the post for every line. It was definitely BreaktheBar something. (I had to scroll all the way to the bottom to download the post.)

FlareNight