Font of Fertility Ch. 22 (Beta)
Added 2023-08-29 07:45:58 +0000 UTCThe content of this post has been removed for the time being as I, Break, make sure that the story fully complies with Patreon ToS and does not risk my platform. If this post has not been edited back into existence after some time, assume that the content has been made available in a larger bundle.
Sorry for the inconvenience, hopefully all will be righted soon.
~Break.
Comments
Typo: in the food court scene when they are talking about what is next. Stacey says do you want to come and live with Stacey and I. Should be Lindsey and I.
Michael Duke
2024-06-24 05:23:07 +0000 UTCI would argue that, in the framework of the story, being with someone like Jeremiah is the ideal fit for someone who struggles with Nymphomania compounded with submissive tendencies. In their harem she is loved, protected, accepted for who she is, with no fear of being taken advantage of like she would (and had been experiencing) in other "relationships". Jeremiah loves her, doesn't judge her, never pressures her, encourages her, and gives her that emotional connection she yearns for that was always overshadowed by her physical needs. I would much rather see someone like her in this kind of relationship than being force-fed medications along with psychiatric and religious dogma shouting down at her that who she is is wrong.
Mehntal1st
2023-09-21 12:18:04 +0000 UTCVery reasonable, you can't and probably shouldn't have all your female characters be Pleasantville wife-type characters (Though now that I said it, that sounds like an idea with potential). Adult characters can't be blank slates that feel like they got out of the birthing pod 2 minutes before the scene they are in started. Yet as I said, this kind of situation was a bit much for me. I went "Ewwww" and stopped reading. Multiple reasons too. Other than finding the Idea of being with someone that "reeks" of her entire male dormitory off-putting, the I got my inner protector screaming at me that this "older sister"-type character needs professional help and monitoring. Not a harem or a sex cult. There's much more I can say on the topic, and I'd be happy to do it if you can suggest a platform, but this comment of mine is getting long.
SlaveToMyWhims
2023-09-15 05:34:18 +0000 UTCThis is super fair! Lindsey is a very troubled character, and she's struggled a lot. Characters like her are going to be uncommon for a reason, and it's not my intention to copy her over to somewhere else. That being said, you can't get highs without lows, so I'll never promise that my characters won't go through hard things, or have hard things in their backgrounds.
BreaktheBar
2023-09-14 21:11:17 +0000 UTCSo... i decided to drop this story and it's because of Lindsey character. I haven't gone through all the chaps, i'm at chap 16-17 rn. And ... please try to avoid those type of characters, i can't even decide if i pity her or despise her or love her (as a character) but her situation makes me feel all kinds of uncomfortable. I know, i'm one reader, but there's no way i can be convinced that i'm alone in this.
SlaveToMyWhims
2023-09-11 01:53:52 +0000 UTCReally nice to see Jay and Clarissa get some 'screen time'.
Andrew
2023-08-30 02:01:31 +0000 UTCThis is my favorite story
bona4626
2023-08-30 00:14:35 +0000 UTCGreat chapter! Quick note on a typo I saw - when Suzie walks in on Angie in the throes (vs. throws) of passion...
Toodles McGhee
2023-08-29 17:44:43 +0000 UTCI love seeing Smallworld get a little love. That game isn't revolutionary or anything, but the art is so great and I just really enjoy it more than other similar games.
Daukash
2023-08-29 10:55:57 +0000 UTCThe FoF Ch 24 Alpha took 4 rewrites to get to a place I liked it enough to post. This took WAY LONGER than I wanted, but that seems to be the theme of the month. QTNW is coming up right away, and then possibly Unexpected Appreciation and Le Francais depending on the commissioners.
BreaktheBar
2023-08-29 07:46:39 +0000 UTC
