Death Becomes You 159
Added 2023-05-25 07:33:21 +0000 UTCIt will not be funny
EDIT: added clarification that it's not a flashback it's just a timeskip
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I FORGOT ABOUT THE BANDAGES I imagine that doesn't help at all. But that's a good note! I'll go ahead and add that thank you!!
FrankensteinsMonsterFriend
2023-05-27 04:49:25 +0000 UTCI love the shots of the setting, it’s such a cool tree house bar! My feedback on the transition if you feel like reading it: I wonder if some kind of setting tag like [New Location] would help to clarify on-page that this isn’t a flashback. Or maybe Gwen could still have a bandage on her arm? It’s just such a different setting than where they just were, Aleksei isn’t there for reference, and she’s being so relaxed and silly- which we haven’t seen in a long time since she’s guarded with Aleksei- so it *feels* like a flashback. Maybe the page before Aleksei’s flashback could have her saying she “wants to get back to civilization” AND have a drink? But this and the next few pages are important motivation so I’m glad they’re here.
Doorkeeper
2023-05-27 04:47:57 +0000 UTCThe edit helps!!
Versrii
2023-05-26 21:59:59 +0000 UTCA pretty tree
D'Artagnan Wayland
2023-05-26 17:51:51 +0000 UTCFANTASY TREEHOUSE LAND?!
Jenn_Chem
2023-05-26 01:43:04 +0000 UTCA fantasy world is not a fantasy world unless it has multiple moons
Amber
2023-05-26 00:36:33 +0000 UTCI want to go there
Amber
2023-05-26 00:36:18 +0000 UTCThose backgrounds are beautiful. Lovely tree houses.
Versrii
2023-05-25 13:30:29 +0000 UTCThe backgrounds make my brain SO HAPPEH
Claire Bell
2023-05-25 12:36:01 +0000 UTCGOOD HEAVENS IT IS HE
Apathy Gremlin
2023-05-25 12:19:55 +0000 UTCloving the backgrounds and the lighting on these
Robyn
2023-05-25 08:20:54 +0000 UTCBwuh this is so pretty??????
Velhari
2023-05-25 07:56:41 +0000 UTCTwo moons? 👀 🌙🌙
Fiona Mooney
2023-05-25 07:38:15 +0000 UTC
