Ex-Factor (Part Four)
Added 2024-05-16 03:14:48 +0000 UTCHere it is, the fourth chapter of Ex-Factor.
Originally, I was intending for this story to be more drawn out and longer, but with everything that's been happening, I felt like going at this hard. The next part will be the finale. Let me know what you think of this. I do occasionally get complaints that my muscle girls are "too mean," or one review on Amazon called Emma Ascension "abusive." So, after the end of Ex-Factor things will be gentler in the next story.
Comments
Usually my meanness has a point to it. Sometimes the women have to "break" or "train" the men. It was Emma's Ascension I got a lot of complaints, but I thought it was appropriate for that story, especially since Joe starts off as a big, macho guy. He needs to be broken by Emma before he submits. I found that extremely sexy when I was writing it, but not everyone agrees.
J. D. Tufts
2024-05-22 08:26:39 +0000 UTCI'll keep that in mind for later stories. I have one like that coming up called The Cheerleader. I think it will be one of the June stories.
J. D. Tufts
2024-05-22 08:23:50 +0000 UTCReally enjoyed Jessica's growth in this one! Something about a formerly skinny woman getting bigger so easily definitely my preference haha I just wish she had some weigh-ins like Aleena. Awesome chapter!
Urza
2024-05-22 01:34:03 +0000 UTCPersonally I never mind the meanness haha
Urza
2024-05-22 00:51:15 +0000 UTCHooray for pushing boundaries!!
erocha75
2024-05-17 12:36:10 +0000 UTCI've been pushing the boundaries a bit lately because I'm a bit frustrated with censorship, but I don't get how anybody finds women I've written to be abusive either. I usually write the men as wanting to be dominated, and if they show reluctance, it is usually because they're embarrassed or repressed and when the woman makes them submit, they are actually happier.
J. D. Tufts
2024-05-17 07:06:14 +0000 UTCThanks for your reply!! The extra-long chapter sounds good!! In my (humble) opinion, this awesome story deserves that (at least). PS I don't think your girls could be called "abusive" per se. However this is kink, right? We are not reading this for them to be role models. From your stories I have read, they don't actually physically injure/abuse someone, maybe Jessica here is the first case I remember that might fall a bit into that category. I think it depends on whether you make those mean characters believable/justified... as well as the men's submissiveness...
erocha75
2024-05-16 11:47:32 +0000 UTCYeah, I'm really enjoying how dominant Hannah is in The Brat. The fact they would ban her story at Smashwords, she would really not like that. They should be scared.
J. D. Tufts
2024-05-16 07:50:10 +0000 UTCI'll see what I can do about images of Jessica. You'll like this ending, I promise. It might end up being an extra-long chapter.
J. D. Tufts
2024-05-16 07:48:41 +0000 UTCHey, I am enjoying this one a lot!! Seems you have already made up your mind, but if you could pls reconsider extending this one a bit more, would be great. This one has such a fantastic plot, it would be awesome to have it develop a bit more!! PS Any chance we could get an image of Jessica?? It seems like she deserves one as well, she appears to be exceeding Aleena thus far!!
erocha75
2024-05-16 04:53:40 +0000 UTCYeah a cute musclegirl might be fun. The Brat is a bit scary too 🤣
Dr. Whoopass
2024-05-16 04:33:29 +0000 UTC
