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The Argo design 3

That's all of them for now! I will admit that I'm not too familiar with sailing, so any feedback would be welcomed! 

Now, judging by the amount of scenes left, we won't have too many pages for too many things, but if there is anything that we may or may not add to the ship, it would be more of something flavorful that we put in the background and what not.

Regardless, yeah, please tell us if you have any further suggestion~

The Argo design 3

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No problem at all! I still love what you're doing, and I think a Gyarados galleon in itself is really cool. If you need anything else (although it seems like you're pretty set) about boats feel free to ask!

Blahman2816

HL here~ Indeed, I put extra thought onto it too, but limited sailing knowledge kinda stumps me haha. I'll pay more attention to it next time~

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I'm thinking of how Galleon sized sailboats are constructed and I'm a little interested on how the Argo will be drawn if it's being strained by wind. Right now, the sails (the "wings" of Gyarados on the side of its face, I think?) are facing mostly straight with a little curve. Maybe it's just me, but for future panels where the entire Argo is shown, it may be better to draw the sails with a bit more (and I mean a bit, not too much) more pronounced curve in them. I'm a boat kid, so this got me thinking a bit. Hope you don't mind the rambling.

Blahman2816

Also, the jinx! Leon's Jinx drawing XD

Jetty~

Oh yay! You posted it! I'm a little late to the party because I didn't get the notifications but I'm putting my input nonetheless! *^*

Jetty~

Wow...so many posts. Hmm...i'll try to comment on them collectively here to save space. First Characters:::: Bronzong ins a cook?! .....i'd ask how it eats the food..but you could feed it in amie I think...either way that's unique. Chatot is a great pokemon ^-^ so yay on a chatot sentry. Espurr as a deckhand is a neat choice. And octillery is for artillery maybe? standard option, but not a bad one. Who Steers the ship? Samurott maybe? Not really sure. But ok...so that's kinda what the ship looks like. Top looks pretty straightforward as well from what i've at least seen in older ship design. I can look into them if you want, cause I don't have much knowledge on ships myself c: And 3 is a more detailed version...ok then. I like it so far, not much to say quite yet.

Cres


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