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Added 2023-04-02 04:57:47 +0000 UTC
Comments
You do a wonderful job with this juxtaposition: Ambar plays the dumb bimbo so well but there's always gears turning in her brain. It really emphasizes the idea of judging someone by their actions, versus what they might say, and I like how that comes across. I also like the way you capture Croccus: the lengths he'll go to in order to satisfy his curiosities, and how he recognizes the way people might feel about him or look at him, but he doesn't care about them further than he can use them. Also really good job with the change in Ambar's speech bubbles. You do so many little touches that really help show what's going on subtly, things we might not consciously notice all the time but do have an effect and stick in our brain.
Deadhorse
2023-04-03 13:29:26 +0000 UTCShe is totally into him, as she confessed to Iva in the other page, but she doesn`t know about Croccus fetishes. Erika gets horny by his strong personality ^^
Zorro Re
2023-04-02 07:25:10 +0000 UTCOh no...
IceTigerV
2023-04-02 07:19:35 +0000 UTCEither Erika has a really bad taste, or she is into abuse. But I think our resident sociopath manages to keep this side of him hidden.
Olaf
2023-04-02 07:18:21 +0000 UTC
