Chaos Chapter 11: Made of Fire
Added 2025-10-27 08:18:59 +0000 UTCA Chaotic Traveller's Journey
Chapter 11: Made of Fire
Hey guys, due to the positive reception of Chaotic Traveller I decided that it deserved to get out of Snippets and become its own work, I have started uploading it publicly and will be releasing Chaotic Traveller for the rest of the week... partially becaue I'm sick and this is the stockpile of chapters I have but you didn't hear that from me.
Deckreader:
https://www.deckreader.com/chapters/chaos11_sjk4098s
Google Doc:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1A-fTVVUpQDvEcQdiXTRtapfoWGqPbUqsTiQ2b5pAGh8/edit?usp=sharing
Comments
This is Fffire and it’s outta control. It’s gonna burn this city, burn this city. And I am all here for it.
Uudles
2025-10-28 03:15:10 +0000 UTCImagine getting a cyberdong with Wi-Fi.
RJKY
2025-10-27 21:41:08 +0000 UTCI actually love them as a Duo. Stone Cold Mercenary who operates with Ruthless and Detached Efficiency, and a Happy Go Lucky Gal who murders with Glee and Sadism for her Boyfriend. Plus it reminds me of that Meme of Master Chief, “There is a Lady in My Head who calls me Stud Muffin.”
SaffireSpirit13
2025-10-27 18:29:58 +0000 UTCSo she can basically kill anyone with cybernetic implants without anyone knowing why it's happening or where it's coming from. Oh nah, this chick's a problem. A cute, bubbly problem.
Jacob Faircloth
2025-10-27 16:24:31 +0000 UTCAlso, reputation, in other words reputation is something you can kinda ignore, in cyberpunk no, is something important, he should have at least a silver for building the reputation he has so fast, is a big accomplishment after all
Sunny
2025-10-27 14:10:59 +0000 UTCLoyalty is absolute but feelings aren't, she can dislike MC if he treats her like trash but can never work against him, though that will not stop her from working less efficiently due to bad mood and lack of motivation so yeah, remember to pet your doomsday murderer AI girlfriend. I plan to have a scene like that, to put it in perspective how ungodly scary Giffany is.
BronzDeck
2025-10-27 13:54:29 +0000 UTCWhen he gonna dress break smasher? Turn him into just a brain.
dragongod0117
2025-10-27 13:38:31 +0000 UTCNow that I think about it, pre-cog could probably be used for helping Giffany hack. It’ll be a varying amount of tediousness depending on the task, but Grimm could tell if a hack will work or not ahead of time. Like guessing a password; have Giffany test a list of passwords within the 5 seconds of pre-cog but stop her before actually does.
Quyan640
2025-10-27 12:08:29 +0000 UTCWe need to head pat the AI. Loyalty may be assured but let’s not try to test that. It really is a cautionary tale on why some people may not want to get any implants at all. You just open yourself up for an attack like this. I can’t wait to see an outside POV of a netrunner trying something with Grim. Maybe Kiwi since she would try to research him once they meet and she just get rainbow vomit in her code or now she can only see pink. Something that goes holy shit he’s a scary netrunner not knowing it’s so much worse. And we’re finally taking jobs against the corps nice! Like I said before I really hope he does all 3 of the tasks that he has to complete the quest. He has to know that that’ll give him a serious bonus. All in all fun chapter! Can’t wait for more!
Loghead101
2025-10-27 11:42:50 +0000 UTCDayum, but I love it! TFTC!
Rauko the varment
2025-10-27 11:24:32 +0000 UTCDon't know much but I find Giffany as a character to be interesting with how upbeat she seems to be.
the random assasin ???
2025-10-27 11:12:14 +0000 UTCI recommend making it so that the MC gets achievements for reaching certain net worth (50k, 100k, 500k, 1M, 10M, etc). Also consider that for kill count.
Rumble Cloud
2025-10-27 09:54:28 +0000 UTCAll I can think is scaroused.
LockLake
2025-10-27 09:15:47 +0000 UTC
