MGU 1-30 ePubs
Added 2023-08-19 00:34:00 +0000 UTCI was informed that ePubs are easier for phones to handle, so here's the first 30 chapters in ePub form. Thanks for the heads-up! I'll edit the other chapters with ePubs individually, modeling off of Super Supportive's was of doing it.
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New ePub is up with necessary hotfixes. Thanks to gostsamo for pointing them out.
Chris Huisjen
2023-08-19 20:24:37 +0000 UTCThank you very much. Good catches. I thought I got those covered, they're even in my notes, but I guess not! EDIT: I see what happened with the timeline. Puzzling out a fix now.
Chris Huisjen
2023-08-19 20:16:23 +0000 UTCsome fast feedback on 15-30. binged it today and will continue with the rest tomorrow. 1. "seconds to spare" is used twice in one of the chapters which is bad style. 2. Understudy revealed her room number to Fursona in the email at the end of chapter 22. it might be a mistake unless Fursona is Bianca as implied at the end of chapter 30 which would explain why she was nervous the first time she were in her room. 3. check the timeline described right before the sport arena episode. the girls' movie + Bianca sleepover are mentioned friday night after it was a big deal for colliding with the Peter's video date on Saturday. 4. Fursona is described as "her" in the fight with Theseus.
gostsamo
2023-08-19 19:26:57 +0000 UTC
