Critique?
Added 2024-10-07 23:57:48 +0000 UTCWhat would you rate as good and bad from a critical standpoint of my photography here?
Comments
Need to see Steph's eyes.
Paul Modica
2024-10-10 13:43:34 +0000 UTCStill great work !!
Simpledownload
2024-10-10 00:21:13 +0000 UTCYeah we needed to angle the light more or use a bigger diffuser
Memoirs of Steph
2024-10-09 11:03:21 +0000 UTCThat’s some nice feedback! He had asked me to be serious and directed that pose. I think we should use flash photography for this one.
Memoirs of Steph
2024-10-09 11:02:26 +0000 UTCAwe thank you 😊
Memoirs of Steph
2024-10-09 10:57:27 +0000 UTCThe good thing is that you can wear anything and its fits you perfect. Maybe your left arm behind your neck. But hey, you look beautiful in every pose
Sjonnie
2024-10-09 05:39:54 +0000 UTCHi Steph. I would have lightened the area around your hips to bring more beauty to this area and I would have moved your left arm to be in the same proportion as your right arm.
Simpledownload
2024-10-08 12:30:23 +0000 UTCI'm a little mental (but my shrink is working on it) so I see little things that won't make sense to a normal person...I like it but those strappy things on her legs have different spacings...I'm not partial to the color of the background but it kinda goes with the color of the straps thingy she's wearing but I really don't like the texture of the background...the photography part looks good...maybe a little softer light ...and Crack a joke so she'll smile some...when she smiles, her eyes do too...
John
2024-10-08 04:15:58 +0000 UTCNo I appreciate it. Thank you
Memoirs of Steph
2024-10-08 02:35:27 +0000 UTCWe all learn from our trying. Sometimes it works out, sometimes it doesn't. But that's my critique, lol.
Pete
2024-10-08 02:35:02 +0000 UTCI don’t like the fact that I used continuous light source here. It contributed to an over lit scene as Pete said, uneven light distribution as Peter said, and surprisingly no one said the shadow her hand is causing in her lower body area. I’ll do better next time 📸
Memoirs of Steph
2024-10-08 02:17:36 +0000 UTCThank you. Thanks Michael
Memoirs of Steph
2024-10-08 02:15:24 +0000 UTCNoted! This was one pose of dozens I directed this pose 😅😭
Memoirs of Steph
2024-10-08 02:15:08 +0000 UTCYeah, I agree. I could have avoided this by using bigger diffuser.
Memoirs of Steph
2024-10-08 02:13:24 +0000 UTCThat’s my fault. I asked her to pose that way. I posing is my weak area.
Memoirs of Steph
2024-10-08 02:12:01 +0000 UTCThe overall lighting is good with the taper but the pose does not look natural.
Derek Gilboe
2024-10-08 00:46:16 +0000 UTCThe light around Steph's head is soft and highlights her hair and face. But it becomes stark lower on her body as it dissolves to shadow. It's a beautiful composition.
Peter Paris
2024-10-08 00:05:11 +0000 UTCFrom a technical aspect: i personally feel the scene is over lit. Especially head and shoulders. From an artistic point: this is probably one of the more boring poses.
Pete
2024-10-08 00:03:28 +0000 UTCHello gorgeous. You look like your thinking of something special.
Ray
2024-10-07 23:59:15 +0000 UTCAll good.
Michael
2024-10-07 23:59:04 +0000 UTCVery beautiful
Kev2Nancy
2024-10-07 23:58:52 +0000 UTC
