BTC2: Chapter 28
Added 2023-01-19 16:01:02 +0000 UTCTABLE OF CONTENTS:
Prolo
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That stray beam of sunlight has it out for Matty. He can't throw that thing off his trail for nothin.
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2023-03-18 01:41:05 +0000 UTCI agree with Ave_Joe, there are definitely some burning questions having to do with the fate of Kai. It looks like there might the opportunity for Matt to do some growing up. He seems to be on the verge of realizing how empty casual sex is without the love and affection he shares with his girlfriends. Now if only the girls would get on the bandwagon. On a more technical note, I’m not a fan of flashbacks without a real purpose. I feel that a flashback should traverse a significant amount of time (years) and deal with matters of deep significance to the story/characters. For instance, the first time someone met the love of their life, the moment a love broke someone’s heart, or other life-altering event.
Loneshot
2023-02-01 04:59:39 +0000 UTCSo, what’s the story on Eve’s former boyfriend? Injured? In the military? Married to one he doesn’t love? Gay? (Not that there’s anything wrong with that.
Ave_Joe
2023-01-24 04:33:54 +0000 UTCIt feels like there was a significant jump between the end of 27 and the start of 28. (I mean, besides the time-slip.)
cpip
2023-01-21 07:35:14 +0000 UTCBig orgy chaptesr are always a blast
Jon
2023-01-21 06:16:01 +0000 UTCSam is and always will be the best
Wookey
2023-01-20 01:59:39 +0000 UTC
