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"The Depths" - Page 73 (script)

Surprise, surprise... *^^*

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THE DEPTHS: PAGE 73:

Panel 1:

[The two lovers lie naked in the surf, Leilani laying atop of him and smiling, caressing his cheek, as David touches her breast and smiles back.]

DAVID: Leilani? I know I asked before but…I-I’m asking again. Please marry me.

LEILANI: Why?

DAVID: Because I love you. And I can’t see me with anyone else. Not ever.


Panel 2:

[Leilani sits up and David curls up next to her.]

LEILANI: <My heart belongs to you.>

DAVID: What?

LEILANI: I…I said that I love you too.

DAVID: You have such a beautiful language. I fell in love with your people, your culture, your…well, everything.


Panel 3:

[Closer to Leilani’s face, showing how beautiful she really is, her green eyes sparkling like jewels, her dark wet hair draping her face like a wedding veil already.]

LEILANI: Stay here…with me?

 

Panel 4:

[Back to a medium image of David holds Leilani’s paws and nuzzles her cheek. She still seems unsure.]

DAVID: You know I can’t do that as much as I really want to. That’s why you have to come-

LEILANI: Y-Yes.


Panel 5:

[David looks into her eyes, still holding her paws. Leilani is smiling sheepishly.]

DAVID: You mean, yes, you’ll marry me…?

LEILANI: I will marry you… 


Panel 6:

[David pushes Leilani down into the sand and kisses her passionately, as she wraps her legs around him.]

CAPTION:

“I-I chose a new path in that moment. A path I thought we could take…”


NEXT PAGE: (page 74)

Large one-page wedding scene:

CAPTION:

“together…”

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I know at least one reader who is going to be blown away by this reveal. He was 100% sure these two were going to make love and then he would say goodbye. *^^*

Too bad he's not a Patreon, or he'd know now. Haha! *^^*


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