Burial of the Rats pg 13
Added 2016-11-26 23:35:00 +0000 UTCOne of the toughest panels so far, launching from a seated position into a full speed run isn't easy to portray. Originally I had some anime/zoom lines in there, but ditched them last minute. I think it reads much better without them.
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At the risk of "spoilers" in a 102 year old story, Chancey tells the story from a past tense. I decided to alter it and make it present tense, to be more exciting. I may ultimately change the ending as well, thanks to this comment of yours ;)
Dave Davenport (dogspunk)
2016-11-27 23:17:39 +0000 UTC"without" -- without the zoom lines
TomQ
2016-11-27 17:59:50 +0000 UTCthis is great with the 'zoom lines' - i can feel the panic; and as much as i like chancey, i am secretly hoping for his demise .. :)
TomQ
2016-11-27 17:59:37 +0000 UTC
