NoraNora5~8

That is some fierce make-up sex

Phantasmas35

Thank you Kine-san😊✨✨

NOMIFUKI

"WTF IS THAT LET'S DO IT" Seriously made me laugh. Ahahaha! Good job, I love your comic!

Thank you Boroco Cat-san☺️✨✨✨✨

NOMIFUKI

"I'M GOING TO FUCK YOU TO HEAVEN" sounds kind of strange. I think you intend for it to sound like "I'M GOING TO FUCK YOU TO HELL AND BACK" which sounds more threatening and funny in my opinion.

Boroco Cat

They are so cute trying so hard to be better at their relationship!! I love them so much ;A; *I am in the distance watching them with binoculars*

ワンワン

I-am-bambooさん、メッセージありがとうございます☺️混乱させてしまい申し訳ありません🙇💦 日本語版は英語版の発売と同時に、デジケット にて販売しようと考えています パトロンでの公開も来月から始める予定です💪漫画の原稿を一から取り込み直してセリフを入れ直しているのでまだ公開できる段階にないのです…大変申し訳ありません💦

NOMIFUKI

英訳に関するコメントでは無い事と、翻訳機能を使用し解釈致しましたので、 英文との差異がある事を、先に謝罪申し上げます。 「漫画の41ページを全て共有し、本にしましょう！」とありますが、 日本語版は本にするまでパトロン上に投稿されないのでしょうか？

Hello Seehund-san☺️✨✨ Ooooh thank you !!!😳thats much better!!!!so thank you ☺️🙏Arigatou gozaimasu!!

NOMIFUKI

NIce work dude, I love how this is progressing! Some notes: Page 6: Kuro & Shiro: " I'LL FUCKIN' KILL Y-" for grammar Guy: " I'm so sorry bae! I didn't know." 'that' didn't really need to be there Guy: "I'm very sorry! I promise I'll get you another one, the same one!" a little better grammar-wise and adds emphasis on how sorry he is Guy: "Yeah, promise. I get paid this week, so I'll even buy you two!" 'I'll' doesn't work in this context Girl: "It's alright, forget about it. Let's go and eat pancakes instead!" reads better Page 7: Shiro: "H-hey...didn't they look like a real couple to you?" reads much better Kuro: "WTF is that-let's do it!!" gives the sentence a rest without turning it into two sentences, but still keeps the comedic-timing with his abrupt change in attitude. (last minute idea) I hope this helps, but again, great job!

Hr. Seehund

I am so sorry Captain JawZ-san😭💦I searched a lot but couldn’t understand what “adjacent files” is💦💦

NOMIFUKI

Would it be possible for you to add pages as "adjacent files" on the posts? adding them on the post seems to make the resolution very small

Captain JawZ

Thank you Agito-san😭✨✨✨🙏🙏💦💦

NOMIFUKI

Hey Nomi-san. For the page 5 & 6, instead of using "you fuck!", you could use "You fucker!" or just "Fuck you!". Because it seems weird with the pronunciation. Anyways, keep up the good work!

Thank you Jake Soot-san😳✨✨helps me a lot!!!

NOMIFUKI

Page 7 on the 2nd panel: it should probably read “didn’t they really look like a couple..?”

Jake Soot

Whew, my third comment on this post, lol. In regards to finding an English title for this manga, why not call it “Pye-Dogs”? (It means “ownerless half-wild Asian stray dog” (from Collins Dictionary) which kinda applies to the main pair in this couple pretty well. :3 )

Meowcino

OH...!!! That was the word I was searching for...!!! Thank you for the perfect word☺️✨✨✨✨✨✨

NOMIFUKI

"Reconciliation Sex" is kinda long winded. The term most people usually use is "make up sex."

Neeul

Woooow that’s what I wanted to say✨😳😳😳😳thankyou Len蓮-san!!!!!

NOMIFUKI

お疲れ様！ For page 5: Kuro "B,but we don't know how to end a fight without throwing punches to each other..." Shiro"......I think we can do that too!" Kuro"Really?" Just to make the lines flow better

Oh my , this is not about English, it’s a MATH MISTAKE😳dumb me lol thank you for telling me☺️✨fixed it!!!

NOMIFUKI

you mean 5 to 8?

Diego P

Thank you Nathan snake-san😭💦

NOMIFUKI

Marvelous job with the pages! :) If I may, I would suggest in the first page instead of “it took hours”, “it took me hours” would be more grammatically correct. Hope it helps ;)

nathansnake

TH-THANK YOU CORNIER-SAN, I-I AM S-SO HAPPY TO HAVE YOU😭😭😭practicing stuttering

NOMIFUKI

All good! Apart from that, you might also want to use a “-“ instead of a “,” when doing stuttering. (example: “h-hey” looks better than “h,hey” when someone repeats a sound.) You also might want to worry about capitals at the start of the sentence. (example: using an uppercase C in the speech bubble for “Couples don’t fight all the time, they argue!”) Sorry if it’s harsh, but you’ve done a great job so far! I’ll probably DM you edited versions of the pages for you to look at, if that’s okay. :)

Meowcino

Thank you Cornier-san!!😳✨✨ARIGATOUGOZAIMASU!!!

NOMIFUKI

Thank you Messr Das -san!🥺✨✨so helpful!!!

NOMIFUKI

Good work, as usual, Nomifuki. :) Just a quick suggestion, when one of the guys say “Your dead”, it should be “You’re dead”. It’s only a minor correction, but it makes it easier to read, nonetheless.

Meowcino

Page 4 "I was keeping that for dessert and I was fucking *excited* to eat it!"

Messr Das