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Eddie Bowley
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The Trouble With Time Travel

Still trying to settle with the title but here is a rough draft of the script I literally just finished! Thank you to the response to my last past, it definitely inspired and shaped a lot of what went into this script.

Let me know what you think!

The Trouble With Time Travel

Comments

Ah that makes sense, I'm sure it'll all come out awesome on screen!

Matthew Smith

The way I'm framing the references is that I'm clearly alluding to a different example but then with an intentionally sloppy edit (i.e. cutting myself off mid-word) it becomes a forced Star Trek reference which in the end breaks the whole video. The proper examples will be seen during the parts I explain each kind of timeline story.

Eddie Bowley

Looks good! For a title maybe โ€œThe weird and wonderful world of time travelโ€ or somin like that

mynameismyface

Loved it, was hoping for different references throughout but it did make the ending satisfying. Time travel into the future is the best because no consequences but there's no coming back! The only thing I can think of to add is perhaps some clue at the beginning to hint at the quantum leap ending to make it a proper loop?

Matthew Smith

As a Futurama fan, the more references to it, the better, I say. Looks good. Im curious about what time machine you'll use in the end. I'm placing my bet on the toaster from the Treehouse of Terror episode.

Daniel & Alex

*michael fassbender perfection gif*

William Power

A+, it's a good script!

Chelsea Theriault


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