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Roommate Screening, Chapter 5 - A Slut Screen Story

Author’s Note: This story is a fun commission reward for one of my awesome patrons. Standard disclaimer applies: this story contains fictional depictions of erotic scenarios, so act accordingly! All characters are at least eighteen, all situations are entirely fictional, and any resemblance to any real-life individuals or situations is entirely coincidental. Copyright Fidget, 2024. All rights reserved. Enjoy!

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https://discord.gg/dvzTrFYV This should get you in

Fidget

Btw, how do I get on the discord?

Jeb Johnston

Awesome. I was actually wanting to email you with some questions about how you set stuff up. It would be a fun way to work on something smaller than my novel series when I am trying to figure out how to get that done. Also, one of my ideas is inspired by PGJ

Jeb Johnston

You totally should! You can post them in our discord afterwards if you want to share or get feedback.

Fidget

Ah, ok. I hadn't picked up on that. You're one of my favorite writers on mcstories. I've actually been kind of tempted to start writing some stuff myself

Jeb Johnston

The general dynamic is that she was treating Darren kind of like a gay best friend - someone you don't have to worry about, because they're not sexually attracted to you. She knew that Darren didn't want a relationship with her, and she knew that she couldn't hold her urges back *all* the time, so she allowed herself to let loose and act unconsciously at home. The problem, of course, is that while Darren didn't want a relationship with her, he *was* sexually attracted to her. So, when Olivia was teasing Darren as far as she could make him go because of her programming, she still expected herself to be safe since Darren wasn't supposed to be interested in her. Then, when things went far enough with Darren to get somewhat close to her new comfort zone each time she was Screened, she would suddenly realize that she *wasn't* as safe with Darren as she thought, and she would panic and exert her self control again and then take it out on him for not being the asexual paragon of virtue that she'd made him out to be. She immediately realized after her very first Screening that he really *was* sexually interested in her, of course, but she secretly enjoyed giving in to her urges with him, and blaming all of their interactions on him allows her to still feel innocent and pure and like she has power over her situation even as her transformation takes her to sluttier new heights. It generally feels like a twist on the tsundere trope, and I interpret the ending as *almost* romantic, given the circumstances. Either way, I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)

Fidget

So I really liked the series, but I kind of wanted to know why she was holding back with him. Was kind of hoping for something romantic or something.

Jeb Johnston

Excellent ending! I was just finishing up a re-read of the series when this one popped through! Thanks for writing!

Sean Rennie


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