Housewife in heat: Temari 035
Added 2019-05-15 20:17:43 +0000 UTCHere is page 35
Poor Tobi! It seems that his day today has been very hard, Temari is an abuser. Shikamaru is the culprit XD
Thanks for your comments and likes !!!!!!!
Comments
Thanks GMAN76 , The page is already corrected
Super Melons
2019-05-16 12:00:24 +0000 UTCThanks
Super Melons
2019-05-16 11:59:41 +0000 UTCSorry, it was an editing error. The page is already corrected
Super Melons
2019-05-16 11:59:35 +0000 UTCNeed to fix that panel in box 3, other than that, good work on this.
BigBallENRGY
2019-05-16 04:06:48 +0000 UTCShe is loving it! Oh yeah! XD Uh? Why did you written the same lines twice in the second and last panels? Maybe it will be better to remove the lines from the last panel and maybe have Tobi say, "Shit! I'm going to come at this rate!" It will go well with Temari telling Tebi not to come.
JuPMod
2019-05-15 20:45:03 +0000 UTC
